Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 9, 2021 Chapters:  ...10 11 -12- 13... 


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broken images of a broken world

A chapter in the book Apocalypse

Apocalypse pt. 12

by estory

This must be the end.

Everything is broken. Marriages are broken.
Children are broken. Nobody can put them back together again.

There's a broken bottle scattered on the street.
A broken window. A broken mailbox.
A broke television set. A broken clock.
A broken lamp. A broken man.

The door slams shut the phone call ends
the interface is blocked.

You hear the sound of sirens the sound of gunshots.

People wander in the streets afraid to take another step
afraid to go back home unsure of how they got here
and not knowing where to go

Afraid to look at themselves in mirrors
broken into pieces and trying to replace the broken pieces
and put them back into some kind of a semblance
of a human being we no longer recognize

Afraid to ask for help

Obsessed with pain and death

Walking passed the windows of the stores
with only gizmos and gadgets to offer in the end

In the end, everyone must look after themselves




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I wanted to use a broken up syntax here to underscore the theme of a broken landscape, and broken culture, and broken society and broken up individuals. I took some special care in picking out the images; lamps, clocks, television sets, that symbolize light, time and moments, and communication. Windows that symbolize transcendence from one space to another. I wanted to capture this sense of lonely people, adrift from their moorings, cut off from family, trying to piece together some sense of self out of the world around them. And all they seem to have to choose from are the material things for sale in the shop windows. Ours is a sick culture, a culture of disconnect and finance, personal gain and self love. And this leads to broken pieces of people trying to fit in. estory
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