| General Fiction posted June 11, 2021 |
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an 80 word flash fiction.
Sophie's gift.
by judester
"Shhh, don't peek Birthday Girl, he whispered fumbling with the key.
"Oh, so mysterious." Sophie giggled as she tugged playfully at the blindfold.
She kicked off her Jimmy Choos with a sigh of relief.
"Thank God we didn't plan something big with the gang tonight. I just can't deal with them any more. We might even find some new friends, you know, not so boring."
A muffled cough from behind the sofa revealed her birthday surprise.
Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt entry
"Shhh, don't peek Birthday Girl, he whispered fumbling with the key.
"Oh, so mysterious." Sophie giggled as she tugged playfully at the blindfold.
She kicked off her Jimmy Choos with a sigh of relief.
"Thank God we didn't plan something big with the gang tonight. I just can't deal with them any more. We might even find some new friends, you know, not so boring."
A muffled cough from behind the sofa revealed her birthday surprise.
"Oh, so mysterious." Sophie giggled as she tugged playfully at the blindfold.
She kicked off her Jimmy Choos with a sigh of relief.
"Thank God we didn't plan something big with the gang tonight. I just can't deal with them any more. We might even find some new friends, you know, not so boring."
A muffled cough from behind the sofa revealed her birthday surprise.
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Writing Prompt Write a complete story in 80 words or less. The theme is 'Surprise.' You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic. |
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