General Poetry posted June 10, 2021


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A Nonet poem about the end of a relationship

Leaving

by Pj Dennison

It would not be him who says a word.
He would not pretend he had heard,
A single thing I have said.
My bags packed, on the bed.
He stood silently.
Just watching me.
As I leave
My heart
There.



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#61
June
2021


I wanted to write my first Nonet and this is what came to me. It is about an uncommunicative breaking up.
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