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A chapter in the book Creative Collections

The Judas In Him

by dovemarie

To him I was an object to get laid
Never thought I'd be betrayed
Years of mixed message after message
Tearing my feelings into disastrous wreckage

His "Hey, I do love you" in conversation
Gave me a wild, glowing sensation
This was his loving portrayal
Soon to blossom into withering betrayal

He left me for another
I was getting too old to suffer
Leading me on into a darkened forest
With my heart hammering 'neath my breast

A lover's fantasy
Turned to harsh reality
Never should I have given my heart
He broke it right from the very start






































































































































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Loves betrayal writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a lovers betrayal. Any length or style will be fine.


A man named Stephen led me on for years, then went off and had good times with a girlfriend. He had asked me to be his girlfriend, then a couple of weeks later he started hanging around with her. He was with her for 8 or 9 years, until she died.
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