| General Fiction posted April 6, 2021 |
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Your Last Big Shoot
The Inaccuracy of Intention
by Jay Squires
Thirty feet: a comfortable distance for a 10-year-old; far enough for you to feel elation, yet not close enough to hear the muted splut of the BB against downy flesh, or to see your trophy flopping in the bloody weeds, trying to stand on the one leg you’d left it.
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Thirty feet: a comfortable distance for a 10-year-old; far enough for you to feel elation, yet not close enough to hear the muted splut of the BB against downy flesh, or to see your trophy flopping in the bloody weeds, trying to stand on the one leg you’d left it.
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#8 April 2021 |
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Huge thank you for the photo by Sandra Granewald on Unsplash
Sorry for this rather bleak image.
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and 2 member cents. Huge thank you for the photo by Sandra Granewald on Unsplash
Sorry for this rather bleak image.
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