General Poetry posted March 23, 2021

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Being busy with work and school, this was...

A Great Treat

by Rebel Jim

Dad took us out on a picnic.
Put some burgers and buttered bread on the grill.

Had the condiments and Potato salad
with some Root beer floats to give a us more of a thrill.

It was pretty near sunset, when we decided to leave that place.
What a great day we had as a family,

Even the birds in the trees sounded pleased.

Nice and calm we were as we left there,
knowing many more days like these would occur,

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As busy as our family was with work and school and such...
We were always able to squeeze in some family time.
I sure do miss that!
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