General Poetry posted February 28, 2021

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Thanking God for His Many Blessings

The Ultimate Gift


Gratitude expressed in a poem Contest Winner 
God, I give you my life today
A thanksgiving offering
For the many blessings
You bestow on me daily
I thank you for this gift of another day
A day filled with potential and promise
This gift presented to me at dawn
Is as a rose bud ready to open
As the day progresses, the flower of life unfolds
The scent of You is upon the air and I run after it
Your presence is everywhere to be seen and I revel in it
As my day fades into the twilight
I extract the last bit of fragrance
And return it to You as an evening sacrifice

Writing Prompt
Poem, any style, expressing gratitude for one who made a difference in your life.

Gratitude expressed in a poem
Contest Winner
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