Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 21, 2021


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He is not like me.

Opposite Dimension

by Raul1

I feel a copy of me,
in another different dimension,
my duplicate of me is rude,
he gets into many troubles.

He looks like me,
but isn't nice at all,
he is the opposite of what I am,
he gives nasty advice.

Pushes strangers for no reason,
he tells everyone to do bad things,
when I see him in my mirror
he cusses at everyone.
Could it be my duplicate
from another world?
I guess.

He hates my image
and my personality,
he is mean,
he's also a jerk.



Opposite Day writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem that embodies your opposite in personality or values. The poem can be written in first, second or third person, but the behavior or point of view must be opposite from your own. Any length, any style.



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