General Fiction posted January 21, 2021 |
When your work is done -
Prayers Answered
by Begin Again
Short short story Contest Winner
The pale crescent moon shone like a silvery claw in the night sky. His gaze scanned the blanket of stars outside his window.
Excruciating pain racked his frail body, but it didn’t match the agony of hearing his mother’s tearful cries, pleading for a miracle. He didn’t know what to say, how to comfort her, or let her understand it was okay.
"Dear Lord, please hear my prayer. I’m so tired.”
Silence filled his room.
“Are you there, Wendy?” He focused on the brightest star. “Mommy said you were watching over me. “
“She’s right, Michael.”
The lilting voice startled him. A soft glow appeared in the doorway. Was this an answer to his prayers?
“Wendy?”
“Hush, Michael, you need to rest.”
“No! I can’t watch them suffer every day. Please help me.”
“Not yet. Your job isn’t done.”
“My job? I’m too weak.”
Something gently brushed his forehead. His pain subsided. He felt at peace.
The sweet voice was singing to him -
‘You are my sunshine, my only sunshine
You make me happy when skies are gray
You’ll never know dear, how much I love you’
He drifted off to sleep.
The brilliant morning sunshine washed across his bed. He struggled to open his eyes. Sensing Michael was awake, she raised her tear-stained eyes to meet his weary ones.
“Mommy, I love you.”
Tears streamed down her face. “I love you, too.”
His beautiful angel took his hands and smiled, “Your job is done!” as they whispered goodbye.
The pale crescent moon shone like a silvery claw in the night sky. His gaze scanned the blanket of stars outside his window.
Excruciating pain racked his frail body, but it didn’t match the agony of hearing his mother’s tearful cries, pleading for a miracle. He didn’t know what to say, how to comfort her, or let her understand it was okay.
"Dear Lord, please hear my prayer. I’m so tired.”
Silence filled his room.
“Are you there, Wendy?” He focused on the brightest star. “Mommy said you were watching over me. “
“She’s right, Michael.”
The lilting voice startled him. A soft glow appeared in the doorway. Was this an answer to his prayers?
“Wendy?”
“Hush, Michael, you need to rest.”
“No! I can’t watch them suffer every day. Please help me.”
“Not yet. Your job isn’t done.”
“My job? I’m too weak.”
Something gently brushed his forehead. His pain subsided. He felt at peace.
The sweet voice was singing to him -
‘You are my sunshine, my only sunshine
You make me happy when skies are gray
You’ll never know dear, how much I love you’
He drifted off to sleep.
The brilliant morning sunshine washed across his bed. He struggled to open his eyes. Sensing Michael was awake, she raised her tear-stained eyes to meet his weary ones.
“Mommy, I love you.”
Tears streamed down her face. “I love you, too.”
His beautiful angel took his hands and smiled, “Your job is done!” as they whispered goodbye.
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