General Poetry posted November 29, 2020


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Feeling.....

by tempeste

snug,
huge yet loving paws hug
 cub



Rhyme That 1-6-1 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a three-line poem with a syllable count of 1-6-1, where all three lines rhyme. Any theme/subject.


Committee asked me to change my last rhyming word so from cub I went to thug

Thug ..... doesn t necessarily stand for a criminal .

it has a broader meaning

.. it can be used in a positive way .. tiny thug .. a tough tyke .. resilient.. lives a life with many tough trials but prevails

After the contest is done I will put cub back


Numbers:

Mortality rate of lion cubs in the Kruger National Park and surrounds sits at around 50% in their first year, with the figure rising to about 80% mortality overall.


Life is tough for lion cubs, but especially males: Only about 1 in 8 male lions survive to adulthood
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