Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 17, 2020

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Never tire of making a wish...

The Young and the Tired Hearts

by Y. M. Roger

Throngs of shining stars,
each may yield my heart’s desire ~
All those wishes in waiting
Stars yet fill the sky,
mocking my years of wishing~
All just wasted on wonder


Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.


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