By Alcreator Litt Dear
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It's righteous to be in the good book of God, because, it seems talking, advising and giving suggestions is not enough; yearning for benefit and recognition, man acts under compulsion; thus, upon clear aim, show examples of earthly living, inspire man, cause no suffering to man, incur no loss of human and natural resources, and use gifts of Nature properly.
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Some wise reviewers wrote reviews without reading Author Notes and spread misconceptions and misinterpretations inadvertently and carelessly This is no more a Contest Entry; Contest ended and expired about three years ago, 7th August, 2018 Repetition and lesser punctuation are necessary for maintaining the term of the contest, and for clarity of expression of thoughts for the sake of contest, and at the same time, I tried to keep my art and style of expression; however, this work is edited today This is expressed in almost an article format, but, this site offers no option of choosing article as a genre; so, I have posted this under the genre of non-fiction, though, I think, it is not so inappropriate for this writing work This is a sentence in term of writing an article in 60 words as it is needed or required for the contest On MS Word, Word count: 60 as I have fulfilled the limitation of the contest for expression of the theme The word God is used as required for the contest The word righteous is used for appreciation of the theme better, instead of other words like good, profitable or humane (since the use of the word 'God' is compulsory, so I think, righteous is more appropriate, as I have used the word for the contest Being a learner-writer, I would ever appreciate a fair, wise, expressive, creative, comprehensive, complete, clear, compact and candid review with your honest suggestion(s) in order to help me continue learning and improvement in my writing Picture borrowed free download from internet Thank you for reading, and thanks a lot for writing a fair review after reading this Author Notes |
By Alcreator Litt Dear
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God, thank you again
Only for saving my life before ending a hundred bad days
Down here, you gifted me healthy days after those hundred bad days
Thank you, God, again
Honestly speaking, I passed those test days
As you helped and relieved me from the days old long pain
Nothing really, I do remember now, of those severe painful days
Know the need and value of righteous living once again
You sent me the doctors and nurses at the right time
Over and above, I feel happy, healthy and enjoy my prime time
Under medical care, I am cured eating medicines most of the time
Again and again, I thank you Almighty, Omniscient and Omnipresent God
Gracious, Good and Great God, you're my Saviour God
As I ate life-saving medicines; God helped escape and avoid an operation
In ICU, doctors treated to cure and make me fit without doing an operation
Nothing's impossible, God's Grace, and doctors cured me in summation
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Repetition is compulsory, and use of less punctuation are intentional God is religion free This does not promote or canvass any known, unknown, recognised or unrecognised, particular, specific religion, or religious philosophy, religious faith, religious belief or religious scripture ICU is Intensive Care Unit of a hospital Picture borrowed free download from internet Thank you for reading and reviewing |
By Alcreator Litt Dear
| Author Note: | This is a 3 line spiritual, non-acrostic poem in my art and style of expression; enjoy my experience with God, this poem expresses God gives me everything that Only He knows right for mankind |
Good, grand, gracious and great to write it is! Almost every day, per will of God, I get everything from Him for He knows what I need and gives me everything;
Only later, I discover what and why the thing comes from Omniscient God for I experience the discovery of the things as I find He knows my genuine, dire or absolute need, and I get it from Omnipotent God rightly at His time, for I get everything from Omnipresent God at the right place, rightly as per His Plan for me and mankind in perspectives, after He judges my needs are beyond my scope of personal wish fulfillment and He finds my needs are appropriate to the cause of contributory beneficial for mankind as from Him I would get everything;
Distinct and different, however and whatsoever, from what I prayed for, but I feel happy with Him for He gives me distinctly different things from that of my desires, wishes or aspirations for my self-fulfillment, and I soon discover He gives me everything He justifies right; He judges and gives me things different from what I pray, whisper, or pray silently and heartily to Him upon meditation, and I ever remain thankful to Him for He gives me something distinctly different, more or less than what I prayed for, for He gives me that He thinks right and appropriate for me as well mankind and not what I wish, expect, hope, ask or want through my prayers; He loves his created man, as such He gives me whatever He decides for me and mankind right, appropriate or justifiable per His wisdom and only if He finds it is common and or contributory beneficial to the cause of mankind, humanity and human race at large as He cares to give me that would worth for my living in the interest of mankind in humanity perspectives even if He gives me that very distinct and distinctly different thing…
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This is not an acrostic poem Worth used as a verb God is religion free Lesser punctuation is intentional My experience with God is complex to express I express my experiences for your appreciation in sequences This does not promote or canvass any particular, specific religion or religious philosophy, doctrine, book or scripture Please avoid misinterpretation My wise reviewers may please never relate anything of this poem to what your religious scripture, book writes or mentions about this and mingle it to or with your own known, perceived, experienced religious faith, belief, philosophy, feeling or understanding and overestimate or under estimate the words (thoughts) expressed My wise reviewers may please do not link or try to relate this to a religious scripture or book or work you know Please note this work has nothing to criticize or disprove any published books or religious doctrines, theories, scriptures-philosophies Please note I do not know how many words make a sentence or a line for a poem to express experiences with God This non-acrostic poem expresses my experience with God Please bear with me the repetitions are necessarily expressive and significant in terms of my experience with God for your better and wider appreciation The picture borrowed on free download from internet Thank you for reading and thanks a lot for writing a fair review |
By Alcreator Litt Dear
| Author Note: | Please Read Author Notes; Acrostic: WALK TALK WITH GOD CLARIFY ME GOD'S WORDS. Enjoy this Free Verse expressed in my art-style of expression |
Walk, talk with God; clarify me God's Words
And help me live as per God's Words in essence with deep faith in God
Let me learn to appreciate God at par or in essence with God's Words to my best
Knowing is not enough; help me live in and live by God's Words truly
They say often, God is like a 'desire-demand-dream fulfilling' machine
As man ignorantly or secretly, privately, or publicly criticize God daringly
Lot of people ever condemn God and prove God wrong, unwise or unjustifiable
Knottily, a few people tell many filthy or foul words on or to God in confidence
Wise fool, self-declared, self-taught fake preachers, and canvassers of God
Interpret God a 'deaf-dumb-blind' God among some fanatic followers
They tell, God awards justice only to the liars, criminals and cruel men
Heaven is for sacred, religious killer-warriors, and divine war-mongers
Good preachers say God knows each man, home, family, and language
Only God knows each man's issues, problems, wants and required needs
Dominantly, of His Infinite Creations, God knows each man by name and of place
Clear me, some men say, why talking prayers to God is necessary every day
Let me know, why we should love, respect, praise, appreciate and worship God
And why God pardons each untrue confession spoken or stated before Him
Rightly or truly, why God does not award punishment to the criminals instantly
In a word, tell me, why God does not award me for my perfect performance
Fine, why God does not acknowledge or recognize my worship, appeal or prayer
You clarify, why complaints against God are made with God and God only
Make me clear, why I should believe, God can do everything for everyone
Earnestly, why God entertains no reviews of His justice immediately
God is invisible to some men, but visible to a few; it is not fair; I ask
Oh! Why God does not appear to prove His true power or mightiness
Divinely, why God does not forecast, foretell or say in advance man's future life
Say, why God keeps His Justice ever secret, private, personal or confidential
Wondrous purposes, and secrets of God's Creations are unclear to man
Only, God creates everything first, but when, how, and why, is unclear
Really, God, per His different names, gives power to His different devotees
Deems God creates man in the same design, shape, and structure ever
Seems God maintains uniformity in diversity in His types of Creations
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Edited today; yes, contest ended in February 2019 Edited after years, yes, today, this is not a contest entry Edited mostly; never confuse with the title with the acrostic poem Acrostic: WALK TALK WITH GOD CLARIFY ME GOD'S WORDS Title: Clarify Me God's Words (because FANSTORY or this site does not offer space to fit in with the acrostic words given by me or proposed by me to make this acrostic free verse This site (FANSTORY) has word limit for writing title of a work, so acrostic words are lesser than the acrostic free verse, hope you understand my limitation Why the title is different (in lesser words) from the acrostic free verse, is clear to you, never confuse with title and the poem, enjoy the work This work is expressed in my own art and style of expression of an acrostic free verse poem; lesser punctuation is intentional; repetition is deliberate; please read more It is true and appreciable worldwide; clarity of thoughts or expression is my prime concern Please excuse me for all my deliberate use of repetition of words and for no use of full stop for I think the subject or matter is unending or unlimited, and while I am not afraid of being different in terms of my own art and style of expression Please be sure, I have fulfilled the prompt or requirement of the contest; I created the contest; this site (FANSTORY) provides limited space for writing a title, so the title of this acrostic free verse poem is different from the poem This does not promote or canvass any known or unknown and recognised or unrecognised religion and published or unpublished, specific, or particular religious scripture, religious philosophy, religious doctrine, religious book or religious faith or belief, culture, creed, or any religious group, family or institution God is religion free God is God, One, Only, Absolute, Almighty, Omniscient, Omnipotent, Omnipresent, let some people treat God as Gods, ignorantly or foolishly, with or by or in different names for different powers, different purposes or objects or uses This does not relate to any specific, known, recognised, particular religion or any published religious scripture or religious books or doctrines This was a contest entry earlier (in February 2019) GOD'S (acrostic letters), of the poem, used as GODS (acrostic letters) downward, in making the poem This is not a contest entry today, the work is EDITED TODAY, for the contest ended in February 2019 Knottily (this word is deliberately used as adverb from the word knotty (adjective) to mean of a problem, etc); from the word knotty (adjective) in perspective, means difficult to understand because of intricacy Picture borrowed on free download from internet Thank you for reading and writing a fair review |
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