By Roxanna Andrews
By Roxanna Andrews
By Roxanna Andrews
By Roxanna Andrews
By Roxanna Andrews
Author Notes | *Dragon |
By Roxanna Andrews
By Roxanna Andrews
Author Notes | Joshua take a detour to his mother's home |
By Roxanna Andrews
By Roxanna Andrews
Author Notes |
Nyla-The Dark One, cast out of her village and Joshua's mother
Joshua- The child born to Nyla and his Father Dak who would be the "Chosen One" Dak- Joshua's father in the first 3 chapters Dak-Joshua's cousin named for his father, Drake's son. Drake-Nyla's brother Erik-Nyla's brother Hamish-Creepy spiritual leader of the Clan Augdon-Guardian and captain of a vast army Many of the names I will use are either Swedish, Norwegian, or Dutch. It is very complicated getting these names and I don't recommend it to amateurs. It requires using your computer to put in the a word you wish to use as a name and asking for the translation it different languages. You than pick the one you can pronounce and sounds the most like an actual name. Super sophisticated stuff here and almost requires a first grade education. Do not try this alone, without a first grader there to help you. |
By Roxanna Andrews
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The Nubian people were located in what is now Egypt. They were known for their skin, not sure why as my research didn't say which was most annoying. Though later in their history they became farmers and agriculturist, in earlier times they were known to be deadly with a bow and arrow because of their precision. I don't know that they wore red mud in their hair, I added that, but pictures of ancient nubians do show the hair looked to have twisted locks. They are a beautiful people. They were considered extremely intelligent and gifted at pottery and artwork.
Augdon-Army Captian Brock-General, Augdon's son-in-law Fay-Augdon's daughter, wife to Brock Jatte- Joshua's trainer Valdig-Augdon's great grandfather Joshua-champion Agapos-Nubian general Jafari-Nubian general |
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By Roxanna Andrews
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Lyse- Name means 'Light' youngest daughter of Augdon and is a Dark One.
Kidrick-Self proclaimed spiritual leader and Hamish's grandfather. Valdig-Augdon's grandfather and leader to the people Hidel-Valdig's brother Brock-Augdon's son-in-law, a Dark One Dyster-the blue dragon |
By Roxanna Andrews
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I welcome all comments, I want my writing to be the best it can be. Thank you.
Validig-Augdon's grandfather and Joshua's great uncle. Cedric-Augdon's brother Hidel-Joshua's great grandfather, Valdig's brother. |
By Roxanna Andrews
Author Notes | The Friesian is one of the oldest horse breeds and originated from Friesland between the northern Netherlands and Germany. They are beautiful horses, rarely have any white markings and are dark or chestnut in color. They can stand 17 hands high, but average is 15 1/2. I thought they would make a good war horse. They are big and slower but not plodders, they are also very calm and gentle. |
By Roxanna Andrews
By Roxanna Andrews
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The dragon picture is from Google.
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By Roxanna Andrews
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Picture is from Google.
Otters can be deadly. We have had several attacks on humans in FL lately and they are vicious little creatures. They look so cute, but they will eat your face off. So stay away if you ever see one in the wild. |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Image from Google
Joshua-Champion for his people Lyse- Joshua girlfriend and Augdon's daughter Augdon-Captain of the Guardians Nyla-Joshua's mother Arvid-Lyse's brother, Augdons' son Cedric-Augdon's brother Dyster-blue dragon Riddare-Mountain Cat, Dyster's constant companion |
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Hamish paced the council chamber, waiting for the brothers to return. They would no doubt have the mountain men with them and Joshua would tell them a very different tale than the one he had told. His cunning mind tried to think up a story that would counter anything Joshua might say, but he wasn’t able to concentrate. Days with little sleep had taken a toll and he had many times over the past weeks, felt himself on the edge of a breakdown. Being so isolated had almost been his undoing. He needed rest, but there was no time. He knew the mountain men would be there soon and he needed a plan.
Valtar and Goran watched Hamish pace the room, seeming to talk to himself. They exchanged glances and Goran shook his head. “I do believe he is undone. Something is wrong and I do not trust his words. Look at how he behaves. Forget him Valtar. Let the council make our own decisions without him.”
Valtar said nothing, reluctant to turn against Hamish, whose grandfather, Kidrick, had been a most formidable man and had instilled fear into Valtar. Kidrick had done a good job of training up his son, Hamish, to take his place and though he despised Hamish, a lingering fear kept him from dismissing him. Hamish was formidable in his own right and seemed to possess powers no one understood.
Goran sat back and folded his arms across his chest. He nor his sons ever believed Hamish possessed special powers. He was just cunning and manipulative. Goran had tried to get Hamish removed as their spiritual leader, as he felt his influence to be damaging and of no value, but had not been successful in going so. Hamish preyed on the weak minded and Valtar had never been a strong-willed man. He should not have been made council head. He knew Hamish had much to do with his being installed and no doubt his father, Kidrick, as well. Goran could only hope he and his sons would have more influence, and be a voice of reason with the council.
A commotion outside the chamber drew Goran's attention to the door as it flew open and his sons walked in followed by Nyla and the rest of the men from the fortress.
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Picture from Google.
Joshua-Champion for his people Lyse- Joshua girlfriend and Augdon's daughter Augdon-Captain of the Guardians Nyla-Joshua's mother Mathis-Lyse's brother, Augdons' son Cedric-Augdon's brother Dyster-blue dragon Riddare-Mountain Cat, Dyster's constant companion Hamish-vain spiritual adviser Kidrick-Hamish's evil grandfather Valtar-Council Head Goran-Joshua's grandfather, Nyla's father Drake-Nyla's brother Erik-Nyla's brother |
By Roxanna Andrews
Decided not to post this story yet
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Picture of Augdon from Ask.com
Valtar-council head Goran-Nyla's father Jeffa-Nyla's father in law, Dak's father Augdon-leader of the mountain men Cedric-Augdon's brother |
By Roxanna Andrews
By Roxanna Andrews
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Photo from Google
Kidrick-Self proclaimed spiritual leader and Hamish's grandfather. Valdig-Augdon's grandfather and leader to the people Augdon-Captain of the mountain men's army Goran- Father of Nyla, Drake & Eric. Joshua's grandfather Hamish- Clans spiritual leader |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Joshua-champion, Nyla's son
Lyse-Augdon's daughter, Joshua's future wife. Dyster- Blue Dragon Riddare-Mountain Cat, Dyster's constant companion. Augdon-Captain of the Army Drake & Eric-Joshua's uncles Nyla-Joshua's mother. A Dark One banished from her village. |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Google image
I don't think this is completely horrible, but you'll have to tell me what you think.Trying to get this done before Christmas. But I won't hold my breath. Picture from Google. Joshua-Champion for his people Lyse- Joshua girlfriend and Augdon's daughter Augdon-Captain of the Guardians Nyla-Joshua's mother Dyster-blue dragon Hamish-vain spiritual adviser Goran-Joshua's grandfather, Nyla's father Drake-Nyla's brother Erik-Nyla's brother |
By Roxanna Andrews
Author Notes |
Picture from Google
Joshua-Champion for his people Lyse- Joshua girlfriend and Augdon's daughter Augdon-Captain of the Guardians Nyla-Joshua's mother Dyster-blue dragon Hamish-vain spiritual adviser Goran-Joshua's grandfather, Nyla's father Drake & Erik-Joshua's uncles Nyla's brothers |
By Roxanna Andrews
Author Notes |
Picture from Google
Lucas-Hamish's long lost brother Joshua-Champion for his people Lyse- Joshua girlfriend and Augdon's daughter Augdon-Captain of the Guardians Nyla-Joshua's mother Dyster-blue dragon Hamish-vain spiritual adviser Goran-Joshua's grandfather, Nyla's father Drake & Erik-Joshua's uncles Nyla's brothers |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Hamish-Spiritual Adviser to Wahaland council
Valtar_Council head Goran-Joshua's Grandfather Brock-Augdon's son-in-law Augdon-Leader of the Mountain Men Lucas-Leader of the Horde and Hamish's brother Joshua-The Young Captain and Hero |
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Jarle-Augdon's father
Lyse-Augdon's daughter Nyla-Joshua's mother Brock-Augdon's son-in-law married to his daughter Faye Lucas-Leader of the Horde Hamish-Lucas' borther and advisor to the clan Father Bart-The local pastor |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Jarle-Augdon's father
Lyse-Augdon's daughter Nyla-Joshua's mother Brock-Augdon's son-in-law married to his daughter Faye Lucas-Leader of the Horde Hamish-Lucas' brother and adviser to the clan |
By Roxanna Andrews
Author Notes |
Sorry if it was a bit long. We're getting close to the end. Won't you be glad when that happens? =} I think I will be as I feel I have lost my way a few time with this book. It is only for fun, for the joy of writing, but I'm not so joyous over it anymore and even though I have no plans to do anything with it, I still want it to be well done. Thank you to those who have stuck it out and read and encouraged and helped. Though I read this over many times and put it through spelling and grammar programs, I'm sure it is still full of errors. Sorry.
Joshua-The captian of the army, the Chosen One Jarle-Augdon's father Lyse-Joshua's wife Nyla-Joshua's mother Brock-Augdon's son-in-law married to his daughter Faye Lucas-Leader of the Horde Hamish-Lucas' brother and adviser to the clan Lydia-Lucas' unfortunate wife. |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Joshua and his men wait to attack at an encampment behind a treeline 10 miles out. Hamish and Lydia have run off together.
Joshua-The Chosen One Drake & Eric- Joshua's Uncles Jarle-Augdon's father Cedric-Augdons brother, Lyse's uncle. Captain of the horsemen Lyse-Joshua's wife Nyla-Joshua's mother Lucas-Leader of the Hoard Lydia-Lucas' wife Hamish-Wahaland Spiritual leader and trouble maker, also Lucas' brother. Dyster- Huge blue dragon reserved for Joshua. Riddare-Mountain cat, Dyster's companion. |
By Roxanna Andrews
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I have read this over a million times, made a ton of changes and am driving myself crazy so going to post it. Hope you enjoy. Feel free to point out all the errors. =}
A very tiny thumbnail of the book. Joshua was born to Nyla an outcast from Wahaland. The baby was taken from her when her husband died and brought to Wahaland to be raised by his Uncles. At 16 Joshua discovered he was to become the leader of his people and deliver them from the horde. He is taken by Augdon, captian of the champions who lived and trained to defeat the horde. Joshua is trained as a warrior and given a magnificent blue dragon to ride. He falls in love with and marries Augdon's adopted daughter Lyse. He is reunited with his mother Nyla who joins the warriors in their quest to put an end to the horde. Joshua-The Chosen One Drake & Eric- Joshua's Uncles Augdon-Trained Joshua as a warrior. Lyse's father Jarle-Augdon and Cedric's father. Cedric-Augdons brother, Lyse's uncle. Captain of the horsemen Lyse-Joshua's wife Nyla-Joshua's mother Lucas-Leader of the Hoard Lydia-Lucas' wife Hamish-Wahaland Spiritual leader and trouble maker, also Lucas' brother. Dyster- Huge blue dragon reserved for Joshua. Riddare-Mountain cat, Dyster's companion. |
By Roxanna Andrews
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*I sometime use just 'the black' rather than witing 'the black dragon' over and over. If it is confusing or seems unfinished, please let me know.
Joshua-The Chosen One Drake & Eric- Joshua's Uncles Augdon-Trained Joshua as a warrior. Lyse's father Jarle-Augdon and Cedric's father. Captured by the horde a year before. Cedric-Augdons brother, Lyse's uncle. Captain of the horsemen Lyse-Joshua's wife Nyla-Joshua's mother Lucas-Leader of the Horde Lydia-Lucas' wife Hamish-Wahaland Spiritual leader and trouble maker, also Lucas' brother. Dyster- Huge blue dragon reserved for Joshua. Riddare-Mountain cat, Dyster's companion. Ond-Natt-Huge black dragon, Dyster's brother |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Let the corrections come as they must. =} Thanks to those who hang in there with this book. Rox =]
Joshua-Meaning 'Salvation, To Save'-The Chosen One Drake & Eric- Joshua's Uncles Augdon-Trained Joshua as a warrior. Lyse's father Jarle-Augdon and Cedric's father. Captured by the horde a year before. Cedric-Augdons brother, Lyse's uncle. Captain of the horsemen Lyse-Meaning 'Light'-Joshua's wife Nyla-Joshua's mother Lucas-Leader of the Horde Lydia-Lucas' wife Hamish-Wahaland Spiritual leader and trouble maker, also Lucas' brother. Dyster- Meaning 'Blue'- Huge blue dragon reserved for Joshua. Riddare- Meaning 'Companion'-Mountain cat, Dyster's companion. Ond-Natt- Meaning 'Evil Night'-Huge black dragon, Dyster's brother, Lucas's secert weapon. |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Let the corrections come as they must. =} I know there are many as I got sick of reading it over and over. I never see my errors anyway. That's what you, the reviewer, are for =} Thanks to those who hang in there with this book. Rox
*Jarle was held captive two years and started a resistance within the camp. He recruited 100 men to fight with Joshua. Joshua-Meaning 'Salvation, To Save'-The Chosen One Drake & Eric- Joshua's Uncles Augdon-Trained Joshua as a warrior. Lyse's father Jarle-Augdon and Cedric's father. Captured by the horde a year before. Cedric-Augdons brother, Lyse's uncle. Captain of the horsemen Lyse-Meaning 'Light'-Joshua's wife Nyla-Joshua's mother Lucas-Leader of the Horde Lydia-Lucas' wife Hamish-Wahaland Spiritual leader and trouble maker, also Lucas' brother. Dyster- Meaning 'Blue'- Huge blue dragon reserved for Joshua. Riddare- Meaning 'Companion'-Mountain cat, Dyster's companion. Ond-Natt- Meaning 'Evil Night'-Huge black dragon, Dyster's brother, Lucas's secert weapon. Mot-Voldsom-Meaning 'Fierce Mother-Dyster's mother, huge black dragon |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Joshua-Meaning 'Salvation, To Save'-The Chosen One
Drake & Eric- Joshua's Uncles Goran-Drake, Eric & Nyla's father, Joshua's Grandfather Augdon-Trained Joshua as a warrior. Lyse's father Jarle-Augdon and Cedric's father. Captured by the horde a year before. Cedric-Augdons brother, Lyse's uncle. Captain of the horsemen Lyse-Meaning 'Light'-Joshua's wife Nyla-Joshua's mother Lucas-Leader of the Horde Lydia-Lucas' wife Hamish-Wahaland Spiritual leader and trouble maker, also Lucas' brother. Dyster- Meaning 'Blue'- Huge blue dragon reserved for Joshua. Riddare- Meaning 'Companion'-Mountain cat, Dyster's companion. Ond-Natt- Meaning 'Evil Night'-Huge black dragon, Dyster's brother, Lucas's secert weapon. Mot-Voldsom-Meaning 'Fierce Mother'-Dyster's mother, huge black dragon |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Heres the next chapter, such as it is. =} Thank you to those who have stuck with it.
Joshua-Meaning 'Salvation, To Save'-The Chosen One Drake & Eric- Joshua's Uncles Goran-Drake, Eric & Nyla's father, Joshua's Grandfather Augdon-Trained Joshua as a warrior. Lyse's father Jarle-Augdon and Cedric's father. Captured by the horde a year before. Cedric-Augdons brother, Lyse's uncle. Captain of the horsemen Lyse-Meaning 'Light'-Joshua's wife Nyla-Joshua's mother Lucas-Leader of the Horde Lydia-Lucas' wife Hamish-Wahaland Spiritual leader and trouble maker, also Lucas' brother. Dyster- Meaning 'Blue'- Huge blue dragon reserved for Joshua. Riddare- Meaning 'Companion'-Mountain cat, Dyster's companion. Ond-Natt- Meaning 'Evil Night'-Huge black dragon, Dyster's brother, Lucas's secert weapon. Mot-Voldsom-Meaning 'Fierce Mother'-Dyster's mother, huge black dragon |
By Roxanna Andrews
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Here's the last chapter! Let us rejoice and do the dance of joy . =} I hope I ended it well. I don't think there will be a sequel. =}
Thank you SO MUCH to those who have stuck with it. I truly appreciate it from the bottom of my tiny heart. Joshua-Meaning 'Salvation, To Save'-The Chosen One Gulbrandr-Meaning God's Sword. In his vision Joshua was told his name would be changed to Gulbrandr, though he was still referred to a Joshua. Drake & Eric- Joshua's Uncles Goran-Drake, Eric & Nyla's father, Joshua's Grandfather Augdon-Trained Joshua as a warrior. Lyse's father Jarle-Augdon and Cedric's father. Captured by the horde a year before. Cedric-Augdons brother, Lyse's uncle. Captain of the horsemen Valdig_Joshua's great grandfather. He saw the vision of Joshua leading an army against Lucas. Lyse-Meaning 'Light'-Joshua's wife Nyla-Joshua's mother Lucas-Leader of the Horde Lydia-Lucas' wife Hamish-Wahaland Spiritual leader and trouble maker, also Lucas' brother. Dyster- Meaning 'Blue'- Huge blue dragon reserved for Joshua. Riddare- Meaning 'Companion'-Mountain cat, Dyster's companion. Ond-Natt- Meaning 'Evil Night'-Huge black dragon, Dyster's brother, Lucas's secert weapon. Mot-Voldsom-Meaning 'Fierce Mother'-Dyster's mother, huge black dragon Mead- a drink similar to beer. |
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