By michaelcahill
By michaelcahill
Author Note: | A Modern Horror Sonnet. :)) |
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I grew tired of all the restrictions. This is my version of blank verse. The meter is mixed. I found that iambic pentameter didn't suit the theme, so I didn't use it all the way through. (obviously) |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | this is a first attempt at a sonnet which I am aware it is not. welcome brutal critique. anything that is un-sonnet like about this I would like to know. other than that treat it like a poem. deals with shyness and love from afar as the sad result that sometimes has some reward anyway. edited today based on wonderful feedback. hope it is improved! |
By michaelcahill
Quill to paper seeks a proper answer.
Spill your heartspeak to this glib romancer.
Skill compels you-- be my heated dancer.
Will you yearn for me, your dream enhancer?
Trust at our first glance heralds soul's surprise
lust follows quick, I cannot fault my eyes.
Dust fills the air--I shake off my disguise.
Must sense restrict my wings? My spirit flies!
Splash your sweetness to my tongue; I'm waiting.
Crash your hips to mine anticipating.
Smash against my lips, I'm salivating;
thrash within my grasp, I'm undulating.
Slide swiftly down, I'll penetrate you deeply.
Abide me softly rocking-- kiss me sweetly.
Tied by passion, true love shows completely;
ride to ecstasy, hearts given freely.
Thighs relax each kiss now soft and tender,
sighs and moaning whisper of our splendor.
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This is based on the lento form. Loosely a heroic sonnet with quite a few liberties. So, call it my style if you will. I have a series of four quatrains ending in a couplet. Each of the quatrains begins and ends with a monorhyme as does the couplet. The original lento form begins with monorhymes, but has an ABAB or sometimes an AABB rhyme pattern as the usual end rhyme. I thought I'd add the extra challenge. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Sonnet: Husband murders man he finds sleeping with his wife and receives the electric chair. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | I missed the prompt! All this talent gone to waste. And all that bribe money frittered away! Where's the justice!!!! |
By michaelcahill
Author Note: | HOW COULD YOU NOT LOVE HER? |
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By michaelcahill
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Two views, one more optimistic than the other. Thanks to Gloria for endless patience and help. This poem is part of a larger project, in which 15 poets are working together to create a Wreath of Sonnets on climate change. A Wreath of Sonnets is a crown of 14 sonnets, whereas the first lines of each sonnet add up to a 15th sonnet called Master Sonnet or Magistrale, which is ideally acrostic. (That wasn't a requirement in our project.) Some of us wrote a potential master sonnet - and we decided with an internal blank voting process whose Master Sonnet we would use as a template. Congratulation to Kiwisteveh for being the author of the winner piece. Gratitude goes to Leineco for counting our votes (without reading any of the poems.) Hopefully, we can post our complete wreath in January. Please check out the other potential Master Sonnets from the following poets: *Dorothy Fennell *Just2Write *Kiwisteveh (the winner piece) *Lightink *Mfolwer *MysticAngel7777 (whose been absent for a while, so she may not post her piece today) *PantyGynt *Rama Devi *TFawcus Also, we have an honorary master sonnet writer who also created a piece just for fun - without taking part in the contest: *Michaelcahill |
By michaelcahill
Author Note: | LOVE AGAINST THE DYING OF THE LIGHT |
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Okay, a real sonnet then. As requested. :)) |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Time: An invention designed to catalog the fabulous moments of my existence. |
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Author Note: | IT'S NOT GOOD TO NOT BE THE KING! |
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Well ... Kind of Shakespearean. These faires are a lot of fun and a good excuse to get drunk and buy revealing outfits for your ladies. Shakespeare wouldn't be writing Shakespearean sonnets today, why should we? I guess this belongs behind the veil. LOL! Join me? |
By michaelcahill
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Crown of heroic sonnets. Seven sonnets. The last line of each sonnet is the first line of the following sonnet. The first line of the first sonnet is the last line of the last sonnet. The sonnets are eighteen lines each, 16 lines abab plus a rhymed couplet. All iambic pentameter.
Please be kind. Hahaha. Notice how many lines ARE iambic pentameter, not how many aren't! Remember that 90% is an "A" in any classroom. Yes, I do wish critique and help. (and praise, don't forget praise!!) |
By michaelcahill
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A nice large view is available in the classic format. Click HERE for the classic view. I put the language and violence warnings on with reluctance. I suppose they are appropriate. |
By michaelcahill
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Jus Primae Noctis: The right of first night. A law giving the King or nobleman the right to the new bride of a peasant on their wedding night.
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By michaelcahill
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Well, it looks like that weepy little nephew of mine is off doin' some goody two shoes somethin' or other. I thought I'd treat ya to a real Irish ode by a real Irishman. Little Mikey's been in America too long and gone soft mixin' fruit juice with his whiskey! Meter? I didn't ask ya ta dance did I? |
By michaelcahill
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English sonnet in iambic pentameter, rhyme scheme abab cdcd efee gg.
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By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Always looking to improve. Suggestions welcome. |
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You've wrought dreams I hope I won't remember;
though true it is ... I've seen through blinded eyes.
You're simple greeting, I believed was splendor;
foreshadowing a lie, I'd eulogize.
I cannot say why simple friendship threw me.
I'm guessing love first sited loudly spoke.
The ground seemed solid to this honeybee,
but, you, my daisy, failed to see the joke.
I realize you hadn't one vague clue.
For all those months I'd felt insep'rable,
a cyclone that the world could not subdue--
but truth told you this man's insensible.
This damn-fool man saw light so bright it hurt.
(I'd altered all your words to suite my needs)
My luck-- you did not sound.a red alert,
and bid the nut house pull me from the weeds!
"Twas just hello, not near a thing of splendor--
I'm left with dreams I hope I don't remember.
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Heroic Sonnet This is an iambic pentameter based poem that adds a heroic couplet to either two Sicilian octave stanzas or four Sicilian quatrain stanzas. In other words, it's eighteen lines of iambic pentameter broken into three or five parts with the last part being a couplet. It gives the opportunity for two or more pivots, either at the octave breaks, or at at the end of each quatrain. You can really get your pivot to a spin with this form. The rhyme scheme has usually been abababab cdcdcdcd ee or abab cdcd efef ghgh ii, but there's no reason an Italian octave/quatrain envelope rhyme or other variations couldn't be used. |
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