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Chapter 1
Truths!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:Avoid speaking truths is easiest; there is joy being uncaught avoid speaking/escaping truths, speaking is hard, accepting harder, confessing hardest, avoiding for self-pride is easiest.

They and you speak truths
Right, God knows, I suppress truths
Under law I ride
Escape, void, love for self-pride
So I lie, feel joy to hide!







 

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This is a free verse, non-contest free verse poem entry in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables; no, this is not an acrostic poem


This free verse poem is dedicated to all liars who think so and get pleasure in lying


This free verse poem does not recommend telling lies or just lying
Rhyme is intentional


Reviewers challenged! Catch the hide (catch a hidden word; clue: less than 6 alphas or letters) word in the style of expression of the free verse poem


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Chapter 2
Artist!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:Wise discover timelessness of an art even from the raw ones, find smile in Monalisa, others can't.

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fools rush...see art raw
wink colour, flavour, life, times
they come, view, leave with
dark heaven, water words, but
wise find timeless art from raw






 

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This free verse poem tells wise men discover art from the art or anything, for example, wise comment how wonderful, meaningful and artistic is Monalisa's smile in the painting, but others come, see, look, view and leave instantly like an unwise man with their comments expressing the painting is a painting of a lady and nothing more


This is a free verse poem, no contest poem entry, rhyme free, meter free, lesser punctuation in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables, use of small letters in the beginning of each line, all intentional, poetic licence used


This is an independent Chapter 2 / 22 of the Book


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Chapter 3
Wisdom!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:Till (when) the sun (truth/true wisdom) shines, dark (fools) reigns in the fools' world; sun shines and foolishness reveals; when the sun glows, borrowed light (fake or dark wisdom) fades away

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dark salute false light
shade truth, soar humdrum, hourly
sun shines silent still;
timeless wisdom glows whole earth
fake fables fade, fall, faint fast






 

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Enjoy the extreme metaphoric use in this free verse poem

This free verse poem tells about wise versus fools; true wisdom versus false wisdom

Dark = fools; foolish people; unwise men; not wise people; unwise people; foolish men

False light = fake or false knowledge or wisdom;

Light = wisdom

Dark salute = fools or foolish people salute

Sun = truth, true wisdom

Dark = foolish people

Fables = wisdom

Fake fables = false or fake wisdom

Fake fables fade fast = false wisdom lasts temporarily; false wisdom fades fast; false wisdom is temporary or lasts for a limited period or temporary period

This is a free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables, rhymes free, meters free, no contest entry, poetic licence used, lesser punctuation is intentional

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Chapter 4
I Enjoy!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:It is true but not easy. I do not know the reason, why and how. I get no answers to my questions. God gives me everything but almost different, as I experience, I express in this

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given,
whate'er I ask,
differently, I know,
my Science Math thought goes wrong, as
unexplained power 'yond mort' offers per
natural, unknown, mystic ord,
an unseen eye, keeps track
my needs, ask not,
given.




 

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lesser punctuation is intentional



all lines begin in small letter is intentional



I'm given all but almost different


God gives everything that He only thinks man needs genuinely, truly and really


I enjoy this when I know or find God gives everything but it is always different to what I think because God gives as per my real, genuine and dire needs and not what for I just beg; God gives only what He thinks right at the right or appropriate time in a right manner and order (orderly in volume/amount of my needs)


Beg to God for anything but it is God's decision to give it or not for God checks and verifies your genuine needs and God gives what you really need for your righteous, humane, meaningful or wise living and not for passing your moments for your wishful living


'yond = beyond



ask = a news (dialectical usage); to beg (verb)


mort' = mortal


ord = order


whate'er = whatever



Math = Mathematics



an unseen eye = refers to God's eye



unexplained power = refers to infinite power; also refers to Omnipotent God (refers to God's unexplained, infinite power to do anything and everything at the right time and at the right place; Omniscient God knows everything; nothing is unknown to Him



keeps track my needs = in two lines of this poem refers to Omniscient God as I know He keeps track of my (everyone's) true, genuine, real or dire needs for He may give me (everyone) as per my (everyone's) emergent, absolute and genuinely needed needs for my (everyone's) righteous living



God is God, religion free


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Chapter 5
Devils!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:Everywhere, devils never bother harmony, ethics or morality. They ask, want or desire everything. They escape no one or nothing. What an illusion!

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desire, illusion
want more at all costs or odds
rationale, whither
balance, or concord? Nay, you
wish everything seen on earth











 

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Chapter 6
Banter!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:Parents sacrifice but may isolate them or maybe priced for a child's misconception, fear action

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I gifted life, blood
light, sleepless-restless day-nights
as caressed, taught words.
My word may hurt, you fear to
disown me. Shame; how wonder!

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Blood = genes or life blood


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Chapter 7
Really!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:This is no Tanka poem; I wink it today to remember on the required day but, I forget/fail to trace it out; I promise like a good man not to wink, fail to remember; at last I lose! Drama goes on

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I think to relate
Later! I wink it somehow,
'Oh here,' trust my heart.
'Summon day' comes, where is it?
Shame! Re-vow! Daily shows loss most!





 

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As you wished, I have endeavoured this challenge free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables


No, no, no, this is neither a Tanka, nor an acrostic free verse poem


I have composed this free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables; but, this is not a Tanka poem; really, this is a free verse challenge poem, as you wished


No, no, this is not a contest entry


No, no, no, this is not an acrostic poem


This is an independent Chapter 7 / 22 of the Book


Shame! = Intentionally used to express - What a shame!


Re-vow! = Intentionally used to express I re-vow! Or, I dare to promise / re-vow; poetic licence used


Summon day = this is symbolic, nothing religious, I wish to refer to the day when I may be required to produce or use the thing(s) again for authentication/truth/verification in course of living


It seems funny, but it happens in our courses of living like daily drama, sometime, we do keep thing(s), we wink at some moment to remember it, but we forget, and on the required day we fail to find or fail to trace it out or fail to submit and naturally we experience loss, but, we repeat again and again, and the dramas go on; living goes on


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Chapter 8
Be Nada!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:Feel word moods! Experience truth; this is a challenge poem tells how people treat someone who seems penniless (he/she may not be poor) wrongly/inadvertently; poetic licence used

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Be nadir, nada!
When you are tall penniless
They nab nobody
Nap, call, name you "no", "nothing"
"No room", "no game", "doom you are"!


 

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Diverse use of words is to give you a distinct literary use of words with some strange pleasure in the read and not to prove my wisdom in use of words for I know you are my wise readers


Poetic licence used


This is an independent Chapter 8/22 of the Book


Be nadir, nada = Be not, nothing (mocking use)
Na, nadir = no; not (Scottish) (mocking use)
Nada = nothing; nothingness (mocking use)
Nab, nap = to seize; to steal
No room = ironic use
No game = satirical use
Doom = death (witty and ironic use)
Nadir, nada = mocking use


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Chapter 9
Errors!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:Please do not review this work without reading Author Notes. Man chooses/turns imperfect. The world is not mistake free. Man may make it better by trying to live more perfect.

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If man were perfect
this world would be unreal
unlike of today
To err is fate, wink not God
who's lone perfect since Day One








 

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Is not man imperfect? Is it unnatural?


Lesser punctuation is intentional


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My wise readers, as you wished, I have used my poetic licence and composed this free verse poem


I have accepted your challenge and endeavoured to compose this free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables; I have availed of freedom of expression and right to expression, accepting your challenge of writing a non-contest entry, free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables and hope this free verse poem without rhymes can satisfy you



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This is an independent chapter 9/22 of the book



Perfect anything is unreal; to think of anything done or to expect happening or performing by man is unnatural



Some errors are natural and real for we know; to err is human that is man is never perfect; God create(s) man perfect but man chooses imperfection or turns imperfect, man is man, his pride of making of calling himself god is his limitation, for man is not divine, man is mortal, man cannot act, do or perform anything as god or like a god; history speaks man tries but never becomes god for God is God and God is Creator of man




God is perfect, naturally and by all means and terms of man's intelligence, knowledge and wisdom, and we know God create(s) man for fulfilling His purposes of creation of man; He create(s) man with some distinct limitations, for God's Creations are perfect, distinct and real; God being the only Creator of infinite creations is divine, beyond birth and death, religion free, nameless, God for fulfilling His purposes, He comes to this world as man (Godman or Man of God, Avatar or Lord) and takes birth and receives death like a man (Man of God, Godman, Avatar or Lord), with a name like man, and lives to fulfill His aims on this world and leaves the world, but God is Omnipotent (He can do anything, that is He is powerful to do anything, anytime, anywhere), God is Omniscient (He knows everything), God is Omnipresent (He can appear, present or be anywhere, anytime), and God is immortal, ageless, and almighty



To err is fate = I have used poetic licence; this means and refers to fate of man, or to mean to err is human


Day One = poetic licence used; this means and refers to Day One of Creations by God, or God's Creation on the Day One


God create(s) man perfect; man turns imperfect; man in his own interest is to save mankind and make this world better, man may try his best to live with more perfect living; part is not the whole; father is saint, son is a terrorist, who is to blame?


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Chapter 10
Wonder!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:It is a wonder if you try, hope, expect to live dilemma free or dissatisfaction free, because living is an ocean of dilemmas, difficulties, problems, criticisms; you can't satisfy everyone always

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I advance, you warn
if I speed through, you caution
if I'm slow, you heat
if I'm soft, silk, mild, you taunt
if I'm hard, harsh, bold, you roast



 

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Feel the fate, truth, wonder


Whatever, whenever, wherever you do, there is always someone, somehow or other to point at


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Chapter 11
Morals!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:Mistakes are common, you teach me morals and punish me for immoral actions, but, what about the leaders who sometime commit historic blunders or violate morals, or even they lose nation

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When I lose something
you teach me ethics, morals
What about leaders?
They lose our nation, country
yield to foreign terrorists!

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No jokes!


Enjoy this free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables


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Chapter 12
Greedy!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

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Greedy!
Haste to see, pass
comments, views, remarks just
think, boast, chat, pride poor like fools
wink, escape or ignore keys, what-why-how?
Waste, lose resources at both ends
mess, shade wise for some time
leave no deep mark
Greedy!

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This is an independent Chapter 12 / 22 of the Book


Lesser punctuation is intentional in this free verse poem; poetic license used


Man includes woman


Man is greedy


Man is mortal


Man is not perfect


God create(s) man; there are wise and fools like light and dark or day and night


Greedy = means and refers to a greedy man or greedy men; poetic licence used


Wise = means and refers to a wise man or wise men; poetic licence used


Greedy comment(s) on anything or anyone instantly


Wise comments slowly, expressively and wisely


Wise visualize(s) slowly, timelessly and wisely; poetic licence used


God bless(es)


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Chapter 13
Prized!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:God has prized him. Question is, should he speak it or not? Please read and enjoy this challenge poem on God feeling, and God Prize. Please read this like reading a complete sentence

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A xeno-cloud in the xen-shadow,
whene'er overcast and
shades xen-shaded to blacken and
booms as chicanery to adumbrate
defiling my golden whitish embroidered azure,
the web of the ceaseless glow I do keep,


then at my very singular call,


Thou truly direct and
I behold seven of the million colors
that spark miraculous lights and
I dip in the oceans of dazzling ray and
manifest Thy lead to me onto the blaze
that overpower at the xeno-clouds chunk disappear,


and then


I embrace love pearls and
learn how Thou dissolve penumbra and
melt xen-reddish clouds
that I look into
thru' Thy gift
the vision in my sight,


thereafter,


I descry my limited days
onto the course bound
widely Thy sharpen
glistening my heart to sense the truth and
mirth of being prized,
the lust of mine fulfilled under Thy governance,


and further,


I bathe in responsibilities
contribute to thy desto' cause and
realize
Thou are unexplained
since
the maiden life,


again then,


Thou envision
to feel Thy illumination,
incessant care for my inclination
as part
of the job
endowed in my favor,


further then,


Thou reveal
Thy wonder rule
as witness
of the power limitless,


I feel and never surprise,


how quietly
Thou help me prized
the pride name in Thy grandeur
and I recall
my reporting dawn
leaving this mort' abode,


and I appreciate,


Thy cardinal rule ain't able to show Thy grace,


then I rem'


Thy gifts of expressions
to be disbelieved, discarded or treated
crazy fictional in vain,


but I see this is for Thy graced hearts to comprehend.











 

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This is not about me, be sure, this is not to hurt you, rightly, this is an experience shared; this is expressed as you wished; you expected three things -- an artistic poem on God, a large poem on God, a challenge poem;


Yes, this is a challenge poem, as you wished, please read and find how far you get joy, pleasure and enjoyment in the read and experience how far I have been able to satisfy your expectation


Right, you are about to read a challenge poem indeed; you expected a large, artistic poem on experience of God; here it is; your discretion is solicited; this is not a mix of old and new English, I have composed this in the style truly to give you more pleasure and enjoyment; this is an independent Chapter of the Book



He prayed and God prized him. He knows none but the God blessed can easily realize, feel and appreciate the truth



Thou (God addressed as You) and Thy (God addressed as Your) used but not as part of Old English, archaic or obsolete words, poetic license used so other words like art, canst, doth not used


Lesser punctuation is intentional and purposive


Please read this poem as a complete sentence


Whene'er = whenever
Rem' = remember
Desto' = Destined
Mort' = mortal
Xen or Xeno = strange; foreign
Chicanery = trickery or sharp practices
Adumbrate = to foreshadow; to overshadow
Penumbra = partial or lighter shadow round the perfect or darker shadow


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Chapter 14
Con Joy!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

Author Note:My style of expression to offer you a free verse poem

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of violence.
Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of language.

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"Selaam Aalekum,
Master, master, master, good afternoon, it's over, it's done,
786 cheers to our 9/11 mission!
The Job's over,
States' pride's marooned,
Back to Hell, the twin virgins are,
In dust, buried the soaring towers,
Black anaconda's gulped the nation's bone and back,
Summoned are the white terrorists,
Mourning Headlong terror's on road, dying!
Loosened, slack pseudo-democratic security cops,
Great Allah, what a lordly victory!
Isn't it, sir?
Amen! Long live Jihad!"



"Aalekum Selaam, pat', good afternoon,
Tell me live! What's the news? "



"Janaab, my sir,
Inshaah Allah, the Almighty Allah,
I see Him in black now,
In an enchanting smiling across the sky, my lord,
Glory, grace upon us, how chivalrous it is!



He's blessing us, Allah Mian, our beloved Allah,
Mian the Great, a huge black flag in air, He's flying!
Praising us, the bluish azure ocean of happiness,
Demoralized Black Panther State is limping;
Dark Titanic city ship is drowning,



O sir, vividly I can see all!
Screaming voice orange is tempting me,
Demolishing milky sound is embracing my heart,
Blackish smoky Biryaani is spraying fragrance,
Lava smoke last world wonder is kissing my lips,
Fire blazing historian is writing history,



Are you listening, sir? Oh yes!
Mortar wise are scribbling yellowish gold pages,
Professor of History is awed with live history,
Excavators' planning is going fast,
Religious avatars are deadly watching the rubbish,
Teachers of religion are teaching history,
Sculptors! My goodness world history, reading they are!
Youths are condemning the leaders!



How's the news, sir, going on?
More to tell you sir, even more!
My salute to your patience, sir,
I see, stone hills are emerging fast,
Growing slowly steel plate mountains are,
Beams are loosing shapes in structure,
Charred damp bricks are splintering,
Gold and iron getting a good mix,
The black and the white are making a flavor splendid,
A painter is just painting the whole on a canvas,



What a joy seeing these! Sir,
Live history, what a pleasure to share with! Sir,
Bones like ants are burying under grave,
Fleshes are lying scattered unfit for Kaabaab,
Live roasting of bones and flesh, how delicious!
A hotchpotch, masonic mix, man and animals,
Sir, before my eyes, graves are growing,
Pebble Mountains, Dust Mountains, Fume Mountains,
Bonny Mountains, Stony Mountains and more,
How quickly those are forming!
And those are taking refuge to graves live,
Skulls are playing 'hide and seek',
Going yellowish, eyes are!



What a grace watching!
How fortunate I am!
Great, I'm also a part of history in the making, Sir,
Just a little more, Sir,
Allow me to finish my job,
Here we are!



Wires are threading pulps,
Furniture are loosing owners' identity,
Sick pop rush for living is playing 'Gold Rush',
Ant survival run film shows are showing great,
Spreading, mountain scaring tension is,



And you know Sir,
War red alert is jeering at the administrators,
Blackly black rhythms are harmonizing;
Dark notes are playing our rap music albums,
Curious reddish eyes are gazing at the century's wonder,
Visitors are rushing hither and thither,
Sealed are the borders now,
No entry of an ant, sir!



To see is to believe, sir,
Aftermath, how soothing and funny it is!
They are media, scribbling white on black sheets,
No surprise Sir, here are many rescuers,
They too love black,
Yellow ribbons 'do not cross' are nice to see,
They are all in yellow,



A little more to tell you Sir,
I know we are busy in our mission,
Here it is more!
Soil is soaking the maroon blood,
Million-dollar snaps are on,
Rumor's traveling faster than light,
Forecasters are drawing back log calculations,
Lip service administrators are expressing awes,
Terrorist ministers are kicking the stone,



Good Heaven!
I hear, telephones are in red melody,
Missing squads are breaking dreams,
Security cops are remembering old lessons,
Pseudo democratic servants are dialing retirement,



Oh my goodness, sir!
No trace of animals here!
A few dead animals are sleeping with white hairs,
Some insect-creature are counting last days with black hairs,
Birds are migrating to black free lands,
What the hell are they doing here, the vultures in the sky!
You too enjoy a little, Sir."




"Excellent! How are you feeling now?"



"Doubtlessly, safe being a dual US citizen,
Better, I'm feeling much better, Master."




"Suvan Allah, Allah Suvan,
Great Allah, Mian Allah,
Aren't you proud of our mission?"



"Obviously, feeling kinglike, nay lion-like, sir,
O Allah, thanks to your grace,
What a pride!
I'm a Jihad member
A living banter!



You know, sir,
I love to breathe in live devastation demo.
Never, love's labor lost never,
Toil of ours is smiling at the government,
Flying colors are visible, thanks to our dedication,
Great many thanks to our trainers, Jihad ministry,
Here! What a black fire sky I find!



Pride is mine, sir,
I'm a witness,
O black universe master,
Pride is mine, you're sir."



"How do you like it?
Don't you salute me?
Love your happiest earth emperor?"



"Beyond doubt, you are, indeed,
O my Master, the global emperor!
O my universal crowned Allah appointed king,
What's our next mission, sir?"




"Wait n' watch!
What 'bout our Jihad martyrs?"



"Of nine Jihad soldiers and ministers,
Six casualties only are there, sir."



"Suvaan Allah, Allah is great,
Do you know our global jihad investment?
Don't you?"



"Very well, sir,
It's nominal for this 9/11 mission,
Two planes,
I mean two attacking war jet planes,
One thousand billion dollars,
Independent Jihad Government,
Royal Jihad Ministry,
Bullet Jihad members,
Million dollar Training Ministry,
Internet n' Global Network Ministry,
And the bonded members, a lot more.....
Right! Amen, sir."




"What 'bout white collar terrorists'?"



"Tauba Tauba, damn, damn,
Casualties! In thousands, all white collar terrorists'
Or all white collar supporters of white terrorism,
Can anyone better than us know the truth?
I know I'm not wrong, sir,
And the losses are immensely immeasurable;
Why should we bother their investment?
Watch live, breaking news on BBC, London,
We are becoming historic, sir,
Let'em make us immortal fighters against white terrorism."



"Inshaah Allah, we got Allah's Orders,
Divine Orders are awaited further,
Sleep! We shall never sleep or rest either,
Till we banish white collar terrorism and hypocrisy,
Should we ever retire?
Enjoy and report the airy nation's devastation,
Allah is happy, as you too have seen,
Thanks to all our members,
We kept His words,
Ok, get ready for underground,
Fly to Kenya on a new mission, Amen."



"To Kenya, my pleasure, Master,
Ne'er stop missions, sir, let's teach them good lessons,
After the Americans, white collar terrorists in Kenya,
More in series, largely to Russia, the UK,
Let all our enemies and foes be buried,
We'll make a new land, free of terrorism,
As Allah will guide us,
O my Orb King Master, you're great,
Savior, accept my salute."



"Enjoy, Alvida, long live Jihad, over."



"Khoodah Hafez,
Alvida Master, victory to Jihad,
Good night, Amen!"















 

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Please read this work on a telephonic conversation between two terrorists, partners or devils, or con men, who enjoy (con man's joy) on devastations as they enjoy their telephonic conversation on the day, slow and freely for I have used sentences with twisted order of expression


God is religion free


God is Omniscient (He knows everything)

God is Omnipotent (God can do anything, anywhere, anytime)

God is Omnipresent (God is present everywhere, anywhere on His Created Universe)

This work is like an act of Satan, for here I have expressed the viewpoints and joys the terrorist partners (one is master) as they on their telephonic conversation get and continue their telephonic conversations for sometime, but there is nothing to derogate or hurt anyone who has faith, belief in a specific religion, case or community; the act is expressed devastating and how two humanity and civilization banishers, destroyers are enjoying at their devilish, condemning and destructive acts on their telephonic conversation



Poetic licence used in expression of meaning, style and art of expression


Lesser punctuation is intentional


Man includes woman


Repetition is absolute, purpose and necessary, though intentional


This is an independent chapter 14 / 22 of the book



Con Joy = contra joy; devil's joy; a terrorist's joy, a con man's joy upon devastations


This is a free verse poem, free of rhymes, free of meters, not a contest entry


This is a free verse poem expressed in a free telephonic conversation, a description speaks how a terrorist describes a terrorist act on human civilization on a telephonic after the devastation and he does this privately or secretly and it is missionary as he expresses his joy at the devilish act


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It speaks the truth in camera, larger and stranger than a fiction; the subject is fictional


It offers con (contra) joy after 9/11; the teller and the listener on the telephone, both feel con joy at the devilish happening


The devastation is now a part of World History concerns Humanity, beyond Religions; nothing malicious


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Chapter 15
Losing!

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Perfect God's Order of Creation is!


Cease, die, and end everything, all, all and all!
Everything, all has to destroy, banish or replenish
Go grave, burn or exist as fossils.



Absolutely Marked His Order of Creation is!



All mortals go to soil, up above or underground,
Letters even to die hard,
Or sealed in history, beyond or ground.



Naturally Authentic His Base of Creation is!



Your status, stand, show, style, pomp, pride,
glory, grace, power, portfolio or possession
like roses, all leave, you too, someone is to enjoy life.



Live His System of Creation is!



Mortally, your relation, your existence will change
All living objects, of His creations, and you will change
like time, all pass; change is permanent, inevitable.



Causal His Process of Creation is!



You are born to die, anything produced to destroy
What an unwritten, mystic law to accept!
Go per His Principle, equally, why worried?



Concord free His Law of Creation is!



Brought with you, what?
You got, you earn, achieve or produce all here
and you use His all Gifts Infinite.



True, Incessant His Movement of Creation is!



Discover the truth to work, live per His Rules.
Acquire! Serve mankind in His appreciation
like the flowers, serve that is feasible.



Workable His Objective of Creation is!



It's never too late, serve like the stick of essence
bow, and appreciate His Infinite Gifts, Creations.
Give it to mankind, which you can, to please Him.



Feasible His Mission of Creation is!


Living here is a chance you got with a set purpose.
Make, upkeep a relation here with Him
doing His given job, report back to your real abode.



Balanced His Absoluteness of Creation is!



Your roles, you are obliged to perform to qualify His Tests.
Dedicate your living to the cause of mankind.
He is Vigilant; you can't hide anything to yourself and Him.



Gracious His Achievement to Creation is!



Giving and serving mankind, no losing it is!
Gain, gain and gain, all mortally, all truly, and gain all it is!
Serve mankind, as feasible, or possible to serve Him, as it is!



Clear His Creation Causal as is!
Perfect His Order of Creation is!












 

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Perfect God's Order of Creation is! = God's Order of Creation is Perfect / Perfect is God's Order of Creation / Order of God's Creation is Perfect


Real abode = to refer to heaven/real home/ from where God has sent you on His gifted land, this world


Go grave = go to grave


Concord free = God's creation is concord free / harmony free / balance free to man for appreciation


Man includes woman


Repetition is absolute, purpose and necessary, though intentional


Clear His Creation Causal as is! = As Casual, Clear is His Creation


Perfect His Order of Creation is! = His Order of Creation is Perfect


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Hungry?

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Hungry? Natural
for survival, you must toil
work; birds, ants do all
















 

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R you hungry?


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Chapter 17
O Black!

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Rule! Glow good, damn black,
Bleak blurs, blasts, blots or bans bold,
Glad! Dark reigns few hours.




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Strike!

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Strike! See 'tis hot, right for a kick now,

Clock reminds; break your dreams.

Wind oft plays truant, blows dark signals,

Clouds sail witness silent,

They change colors in huge Blue Kingdom.





The Unseen Eye eyes you.

Silver, whitish lining woo if failed.

Keep time, kick dark; bring light.

Air plays flute, helps finding your foes.





Why wait? Sow, fruits may late.

What's yours' to lose? What you brought? Why off?





The sun enjoys right kiss.

Shaded moon peeps, pries your miss or kicks.

Birds, trees, hills, sky, good hearts pat you strike.

Let them sing, grab this time or drum fate.


















 

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'tis = it is


oft = often

What's yours' to lose? = what is that you are going to lose / what are you going to lose / what is yours to lose / what is it that you are to ,lose / what is to lose



What you brought? = what you brought on birth





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Chapter 19
Ethics!

By Alcreator Litt Dear

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Hey, don't pluck the flowers.
Get beauty, fragrance, living message they bear.
Nice if you keep a rational purpose, my dear.


Let them bloom to grace us with color, you care,
Think natural ecstasy, must you care our Mother,
Feel darling, a gifted grace.


But dad, they jeer in public,
Oft spoken; He's bookish, they tell Him an object,
on a fool's canvas, a religious tonic, exam subject He's!


Ne'er mind, son; they spare no one, no harm,
lames limp; dark sees black; white remains white,
black changes all colors into black;
All colors can't change; all is not for all.


Can man catch stars?
They treat prophets, avatars or saints mad.
All can't see white..


You are my good son, come here, look at the sky.
Does it appear pale?
Has it lost its name, glory or status?
Does it look like an ocean?


Why dad? It will never.
Black can't see its black truth.


Dad, if A is true, does it mean all but A is false?
Tell me, if I go elsewhere untold,
Will you consider me dead or not alive?
Sorry, dad, how dare I?


See the ants.
Do they try to assume, presume or understand what life is?


Kill ants, keep a few dead ants before other ants,
Will living ones learn death or anything at all?
No, dad, but I learn also by seeing.
My goodness!


O dad, you're great, it makes you my tall dad.


Come, look at the trees; do they walk?
Don't you know trees have feelings?
Yeah, they have senses, books say and I know, dad.


You know, animals can learn to man's benefits.
Yea, dad, our Tommy does all I say.
But dad, why there is no ant soldiers for wars?
Good idea, but it is not practically feasible, dear.


Can trees swim like fish or fish stand like trees?
It's absurd, dad


Can tigers make nests?
Can lions eat horse or bamboo grasses?
Will an eagle ever crawl like a snake?
Could an ant walk like a lizard?
Will donkeys ever eat pigs?
Can cats kill zebras?
Amazing! How absurd, dad!
Nice, you can follow me.


Think of anything without a shape or structure?
No, dad, I can never.
As one decides, plans, frames, so one gets a design.
In creation, see everything is in shapes, structures.
Each creation has a mission.
But we forget keeping a mission.
Do you know what mission man has been given?
No, dad, what it is?
'Serve mankind'.
Think, Creation has features, frames.
All His created objects are planned.
He created objects without shape or colour also,


Yes, dad, I can follow,
That is why computer is not like a bus,
A train does not look like a taxi,
Or a mountain does not appear like an ocean,
Mom and you are different,
Excellent, my dear boy, I tell you more,


Creation or production is per planning,
Then the shape, structure, feature grows,
Know, nothing grows all on a sudden,
We get anything only after production.
Evolution as a process comes after creation or production.


If all was like you my dad!
No problem, all is great,
many men keep dark faiths, beliefs, knowledge or attitudes,
Right you are, dad.
All are not worthy of being called men but we.


But dad,
I don't understand why,
Each and every one has different features?
I told you earlier, remember my words,
Well, I remember, it is because of creator's choice.


Do you know my boy?
Why there is system in each object?
Why all are not same? Why diversities?
All per objectives set in by the Creator,
In case of man's production, same is the rule.


Dad, is production different from creation?
Yes, man is the producer, God the Creator.
Why so dad?
Simply, man cannot create anything like God,
Whatever he produces are borrowed,
Man can only produce all for man,
Man lives only on God's Infinite Gifts.
Do you get me?
It's very rightly, dad.


I give you more examples for appreciation,
Does summer or winter continue all the year?
Have you seen roses bloom in a banyan tree?
Everything cannot change its features instantly,
Features are unchanged; we can identify objects.
Dad, it's much better, I now can follow you.


Think, why only an elephant has a trunk?
Why only zebras have stripes like that?
Why giraffes only have the tallest neck?
Why eagles only fly so high in the sky?
Why man has only 226 bones?
Why all are not boneless either?
Why only cheetah can run fastest?
Why the whole earth is not like Antarctica?
Why temperatures differ?
Why pigs can't run like horses?
I know dad, it is very simple.
A horse is not a pig, so.
Good, you can appreciate.


But my dear son, it is all because of
Rules, rules, rules and rules,
Orders, orders, orders and orders,
Systems, systems, systems and systems,


No escape, no exception, you can't change,
All God created, planned, designed, devised,
Offered, gifted, given man His Infinite Creations.
Is it clear? Yes, dad.


There are principles, rules, orders, systems,
That's why we do all different jobs for living,
Right, dad, I go to school, read books but you don't, dad.
Excellent! Very intelligent you are, my boy.


You know, nature keeps balance, harmony.
Then, should man escape ethics?
Why all men are not immoral or immortal?
Why are not all black, white or dark?
Why all time are not days only?
Dad, it's very simple, I know this.
Bad boys get punishments,
Irregular school boys get penalties,
Good students pass like me;
Good hearts love everyone.
The best boy of the school knows the most.
My goodness, you are very intelligent.


You know my boy, laws are everywhere.
Have you seen good stories end badly?
How many dark, black or immoral men
can wink moral laws and if how long?
How long the sky can overcast black?
I can follow you dad.


Think awhile, my boy,
No problem, if some people go against Nature,
See their fate and stature.
Do you call them men?
Can you expect ethics from them?
But, it is true, you know my son, good will prevail over bad.


Remember my son, few can cause real harm to humanity, permanently.
Terrorists, kidnappers, killers can cause harm.
Only few criminals can banish a society.
Few devils can put government in dilemma.
Few ignorant can condemn a good philosophy.


Do you follow me?
Yes, dad, very well, I can appreciate,
A few bad people can challenge but can't banish humanity,
Devils or demons do not care ethics or The Books.
They raise controversies, preach false faiths, distort truths,
dismantle philosophies or misinterpret hypocritically,
selfishly, ignorantly or foolishly.
Doing good, rational and humane is ethics.
Do you get me?
Yes dad.


But dad, bad people are not born bad or badly.
They are also men.
Can you salute an unethical man, my son?


But why all are not good dad?
Why all do not study like me?
Why all are not like you?


All babies ask the secrets and truths of living,
All study good books, follow good lessons,
But only few can learn and practice, dear.
Some go astray and become crooked,
Some love unethical, immoral or bad living.


Oh yes, dad, I can follow.
My dear boy, just think,
We breathe the same air,
We enjoy the same Nature,


Don't be hypocrite, dishonest or bad.
Yes dad, I know.
Bad people are arrested by police.
They are sent to jails, punished by law.
Right, my boy, I know.


Just, you think my boy.
Even, all unethical people study the religious scriptures.
They can distinguish between moral and immoral.
They too can feel bad, but they yield devastation.
Surely, they have knowledge of ethics.
But, it is their choice to be unethical.
They want to be immoral.
They get pleasure acting unethical.
So, they choose to be bad, to act beyond ethics.


My dear son, just you think.
Could good lessons make someone ethical or moral?
Not necessarily, I think.


Interesting, but dad, don't they know their fate?


Of course my boy.
But, some know and some don't.
Some can't see, or can't guess of the outcome of crookedness?
They aren't aware of dark, black, and or unethical living.


But dad, how can it happen?
Why don't all appreciate or understand the truth?
Can't they dream of good, prestigious living?
Don't they want human recognition?
Why can't they try to be ethical?
When will they learn to be moral or ethical?


All don't know the truths.
There are misconceptions, allusions, and illusions.
Only some can learn the truths of living.


It's nothing but choice, choice, choice, my dear son.
All don't like to be good, rational or ethical people.


You know, my dear boy.
They learn immoral living quickly.
As you find, they choose black dreadful living.
They never think of bright ethical or humane future.
They are callous, ignorant or nonsense.


But dad, why?
They avoid changes or development ethically.
They prefer black, dark to ethics or ethical lights.


But dad, why?
It is because of their choice.


Listen to me carefully, now.
We, you too can help changing them.
Or stop growing unethical thoughts in some men.


Teach, give them scope for better humane living.
Offer them recognition, status and prestige.
See a few may change.


Why, only a few?
That is the truth.
You can't change everyone.


I know, we know but we don't do.
We know the truths, ethics but we don't follow.


Leave the unwilling souls prefer to black living.
Let them grow in number, naturally.
Balance or equilibrium is a natural law.
Dark will banish and lights will prevail, hope you follow.


Let them live like creatures and be happy
with their chosen living, without a page in moral history.


How long can I do, dad?
As long as you can.
Love family, neighbours, country and mankind.
As much as you can do.


Allow no further black, dark mind to grow.
Believe you can.
You are responsible to enlighten a few hearts.
Check less number of new hearts grow dark.
Stop growing to see black hearts isolated.


Is the lesson clear, my boy?
Remember, life, living, or future is yours.
Do whatever you can, choice is yours.


Well, dad, I'll remember.


My good boy!
I'm proud of you, my son.
Thank God.
















 

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Ne'er = never

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O Bards!

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Fragrance, His Gifted Grace, color and beauty
Infinite mortal lessons poured in tiny white petals
O tulip! You carry His White Message, so mute!
You live and offer His Gift for awhile, what a Rule!
Good Heavens! Wise bards drink white to the lee


When bloomed, graced hearts take essence, o fate!
But wretched minds then busy in occupation, belly earning,
livelihood, miss you, eat dark, live black;
you go grave silent 'fore day begins!
A day's life! Wise learn, enjoy cream, and salute Him!


But, wise bards extract whiteness, give life in words
Living messengers offer their white fragrance,
share His Gifts in white and imbue mankind
Beauty in alphas turn presages, O bards! Man salutes!


 

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Wise salute = wise people or wise men salute; poetic licence used


Fragrance is used as God's Grace in the flowers


Belly earning = earning bread


'fore = before


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Chapter 21
Promote Humanity Serve Mankind B' Human

By Alcreator Litt Dear

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Promote humanity serve mankind be human
Ransack ne'er; regenerate, doesn't sunshine do ever?
Orphan no child; does an animal leave such an example?
Mortify ne'er; do oceans displease anyone?
Over discrimination, does air blow indiscriminately?
Tax nothing immoral; does wind retire or tax you?
Energize others; doesn't moonlit softly care at all odds?



Humanity, a harmonized living; doesn't rainbow show, isn't rainbow seen the same way?
Underestimate race or religion; does sunray ever reach differently to a different religion?
Manly live; does the Himalaya bow down before anyone?
Ask, learn and develop; do clouds forget reforming any time?
Nepotism, favoritism, hypocrisy, did God man or Man of God ever show, practice nepotism?
Immorality; did God or any religious Scripture teach, or tell you to promote immorality, inhumanity ever?
Tack honesty; do flowers fasten unoriginality, lose honesty, or follow dishonesty?
You can be human; don't oceans grow, become part of civilization?



Serve selfless; doesn't the Invisible Eye keep vigil?
Earmark service to international community like the sun
Religion is impersonal; does God certify any 'best'?
Vouch nothing selfishly; Let a dog, ant or pig do
Each humane service is part to your destined mission



Mankind can appreciate a service like Mother Nature
A personal possession is a bar; true dedication serves
No profit motive; does God love man on gain target?
Knowledge; wisdom helps; can a fool earn humanness?
Italian or American pride is personal; does God pat it?
No nationality; internationalism is the star God-faith
Divide and rule makes colonies; does God patronize it?



Be man first, contribute globally on way to mankind, race human
Entries personal bank balance, achievement is personal



Human, hue in or of a man; like the earth, serve soundless or in patience
Ultimate contribution like air serves beyond color, religion or sex
Man is human with global stand, recognition like the sun
As history supports civilization; as God offers His gifts to all equally
No personalization; serve as the sun reaches your doors equally








 

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Chapter 22
Shouldn't Man Achieve Human Rank Status?

By Alcreator Litt Dear

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Shouldn't man achieve human rank status?
He should achieve status above God? We identify sponsored, masked devils
Oh God! All babies in womb can learn pre-birth lessons
Under Tech-Info Age! We can create humans, all the best
Lo! Let terrorists, bio scientists networks grow more
Damn! White collar terrorists, bio-scientists join politics
No worry! The certified humans are issued under seals
Thank, O God see our global ministerial workshops!



Man in million centuries learnt Your Destined Cause
After a century, we'll get true, recognized humans
Ne'er worry! We're doctorates in human creations now!



Achieve daily! Watch our networks target achievement
Certificates are issued only to the passed candidates
Home friendly online is free, accessible to our humankind
Internet! Our creation is systematic beyond scientific, now online processed
Effective, public, scientific supervision is active today
Verified, tested surveillance! Spyware, software run all
Each hour, we invest million, billion, trillion dollars on our creation activation



Human! We've free schooling up to post post doctorate, the highest of degree level
Under no rules; pigs, dogs, monkeys get our human certificates
More and more research, innovation and development is going on
After the software, free, open and accessible to all men, we'll have best humans, free gods
No Heavens! Our so called democratic human gods control on earth



Rank! We've humans with nominated, elected annual gods
Alas, no more old creations! We're run by our gods now
No! Our gods are public, independent-in-charge; our
Knot of control, management is higher than scientific, machine run



Status! Traditional, orthodox, unexplained yours is!
The infinite offers, mystic controls! It's enough, thanks!
And the unseen, unwritten systems, and your rules are obsolete!
The age-old, mysterious, monopoly governance, wish you thanks!
Under next human gens, we'll enjoy judicious, 'yond God
Systems, best 'h' controlled measures, sys better than that by God!



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How, why and what man of today thinks, dreams, assumes and presumes about their rank, state and status is put in this work in an ironic manner


This expresses even man's higher status (as man thinks) as humans even more than God; you can understand effect of such thoughts of few men


Man ever tries to prove him God or more than or 'yond God, you know I mean to say what man being a creation by God achieves before or after death


Man thinks soon he can rise his status as human that is beyond ('yond) or above God and he can create more and more number of gods to rule on earth


Man even declares man's creation is better than God's


Man being a creation of God wishes to show, or thinks to prove God is inferior to man once he achieves the state or status or rank human ('h')


Man thinks if he becomes human or man tries to prove if he achieves a higher status human, he will be more than God


Man being a creation of God even criticizes his creator God and man does so using God's gifts while it is true man in million years has failed to create a single thing for man does not understand man is not a creator for there is only one creator, He is God


Man fails to create anything without using the only Creator God's created infinite things that God gifts man free because man does not know and understand a producer cannot create and man can produce anything for man only and only by using God's gifts for example, man produces computers, space crafts, internet, trains, buses, motor cars, electronic goods, etc only by using and availing of God's free gifts and resources like air, water, sun lights, land, trees, and or natural and other resources for man cannot even produce anything if God does not provide, supply or give anything free or if God stops providing gifts or resources FOR A MINUTE


Man forgets God's gifts even man forgets the life is Gifted by God, man can think him more than God since God gifts man everything free and God does not ask for price of His gifts but man asks for price for anything he gives even man asks for consideration for gifts to man


A few men know, understand, feel, experience or realize God and believe in God and have faith in God's words and follow right, moral, righteous and meaningful living through performing activities to the cause of promotion of mankind and through their performance and work or activities dedicated to mankind or to the welfare and development of mankind at large naturally become humans (higher state of status of man, though it is abstract, only we write history of their activities and make them mortally immortal (not like immortal, divine and creator God) and in our civilization, there are so many men who have achieved the status of humans and we read their lives, biographies, bio data, particulars of their contribution dedicated to the cause of mankind or humankind or human beings as race or race human (created by God, named or defined by man)


your = God's

gens = generations, not genes

'yond = beyond

'h' controlled = human controlled; controlled by human; controlled by human (the status man assumes to achieve, this is the humour, I think)


sys = systems


Please have patience; poetic licence used in expression of meaning, use of words and thoughts in phrases


Lesser punctuation is intentional


This is a free verse poem with some flavour of acrostic, free of rhymes and free of meters, though I know it is not a pure acrostic poem


I have not covered all thoughts of man with use of excessive or redundant words to make the work boring to read


*Background is incomplete, FS did not provide adequate space; now I am unable to access, I will change replacing the incomplete background with edited Background (as shown); I am sorry for the inconvenience
Background (Edited)*
The Book of Poetry: Poems composed in different formats; poems on experiences of experimental living in dimensions


This is an independent chapter 22 / 22 of the book


Picture borrowed free download from internet


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