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With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking
by Liz O'Neill
Two stranded women begin walking into a memorable adventure
Chapter 1
The Light
Posted June 2, 2020General / Fiction
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Liz & Linda have discovered a suspiciously guarded house
Chapter 2
The Window
Posted June 11, 2020General / Fiction
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We get to look inside the house
Chapter 3
The Plan
Posted June 19, 2020General / Fiction
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One will run up the hill
Chapter 4
The Hill
Posted June 30, 2020General / Fiction
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The plan is carried out and they go toward a cave
Chapter 5
The Cave
Posted July 6, 2020General / Fiction
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The freed teens begin to tell their horrendous stories
Chapter 6
Darkness
Posted July 15, 2020General / Fiction
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Eyes of the Owl find the backpacks
Chapter 7
Dear Rabbit
Posted July 24, 2020General / Fiction
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Things become real for everyone especially Liz
Chapter 8
The Nightmare
Posted August 1, 2020General / Fiction
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Strong Heart tells her story
Chapter 9
What Could Be Worse?
Posted August 14, 2020General / Fiction
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They finally come to water
Chapter 10
Water
Posted August 22, 2020General / Fiction
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There is a path under the falls
Chapter 11
Wolf
Posted August 27, 2020General / Fiction
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The teens see the panorama of their Reservation
Chapter 12
The Marquee
Posted September 3, 2020General / Fiction
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Making their way toward those waiting
Chapter 13
Land Filled With Pain and Love
Posted September 10, 2020General / Fiction
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Liz & Linda reflect on previous events
Chapter 14
How Did We Get Here?
Posted September 23, 2020General / Fiction
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The car has stalled on their journey & they are hungry
Chapter 15
A Very Special Speck
Posted October 3, 2020General / Fiction
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Liz and Linda focus on the basket with the unusual guest
Chapter 16
The Basket
Posted October 10, 2020General / Fiction
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The women had dreams after drinking the liquid
Chapter 17
Feathers
Posted October 15, 2020General / Fiction
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Our women are considering following a chainsaw sound
Chapter 18
The Lumpy Hills
Posted October 21, 2020General / Fiction
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Liz & Linda need motivation to go on
Chapter 19
Berries for a Reward
Posted November 5, 2020General / Fiction
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Liz and Linda need to cross a swamp
Chapter 20
The Swamp
Posted November 15, 2020General / Fiction
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Liz & Linda hear a strange sound
Chapter 21
Schwit, schwit, schwit
Posted November 24, 2020General / Fiction
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They see mysterious, yellow lights
Chapter 22
Mysterious Lights
Posted December 1, 2020General / Fiction
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The ladies see a speck that is not Kai Zita
Chapter 23
A Speck of a Different Sort
Posted December 7, 2020General / Fiction
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The mystery of the lights is solved
Chapter 24
That's What It Was
Posted December 14, 2020General / Fiction
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The Ladies are sitting in a car near raging brush fires
Chapter 25
Questions Abound
Posted December 28, 2020General / Fiction
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The questions are slowly being answered.
Chapter 26
Nearing the Finish Line
Posted January 2, 2021General / Fiction
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Tommy suggests they get some sleep
Chapter 27
Healing Dreams
Posted January 12, 2021General / Fiction
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Liz & Linda tell about the healing dreams they had
Chapter 28
Telling of the dreams
Posted January 28, 2021General / Fiction
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The adventures in the cave are recounted
Chapter 29
Memories of the Cave
Posted February 9, 2021General / Fiction
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Tommy continues his harrowing account.
Chapter 30
The Maelstrom
Posted February 28, 2021General / Fiction
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Tommy tells the two ladies about his discovery of the falls.
Chapter 31
Back of the Falls
Posted March 21, 2021General / Fiction
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Her sister's spirit was present during this incident
Chapter 32
Spring Blossom's Sister
Posted March 30, 2021General / Fiction
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Tommy tells of discovering two mysterious bags.
Chapter 33
That Second Bag
Posted April 6, 2021General / Fiction
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Tommy and Squirrel saw many colors on the floor.
Chapter 34
Many Beautiful Colors
Posted April 15, 2021General / Fiction
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Tommy explains why he became a chef
Chapter 35
The Pot Roast
Posted April 27, 2021General / Fiction
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Liz and Linda tell stories of helping abused women
Chapter 36
Magnificent Movers
Posted May 6, 2021General / Fiction
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Linda sees Liz hesitate to answer Tommy
Chapter 37
Linda's Distraction
Posted May 15, 2021General / Fiction
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The ladies tell Tommy of their strange experience in their c
Chapter 38
Their Backstory
Posted May 24, 2021General / Fiction
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The cars are finally moving west
Chapter 39
Heading West
Posted June 10, 2021General / Fiction
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Tommy tells about the story of the blanket.
Chapter 40
The Blanket
Posted June 26, 2021General / Fiction
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Liz wonders about different colors instead of black.
Chapter 41
Green is Black
Posted July 8, 2021General / Fiction
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Tommy finally gets to tell his story
Chapter 42
Why Crow is Black
Posted July 19, 2021General / Fiction
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The group has reached their destination
Chapter 43
The Brow of the Hill
Posted July 28, 2021General / Fiction
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The knick-knacks are covered with white sheets.
Chapter 44
Sheets Everywhere
Posted August 7, 2021General / Fiction
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The group discusses complications with the car
Chapter 45
Complications
Posted August 15, 2021General / Fiction
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Led by a coffee scent they search for a way in
Chapter 46
Burnt Coffee
Posted August 26, 2021General / Fiction
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The garage guy acts and looks like Don Knotts
Chapter 47
Don Knotts
Posted September 7, 2021General / Fiction
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We find out what garage guy requires for collateral
Chapter 48
Collateral
Posted September 16, 2021General / Fiction
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The group is taking a dirt road to the highway
Chapter 49
The Fork
Posted September 28, 2021General / Fiction
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Their journey becomes a metaphor
Chapter 50
Twists and Turns
Posted October 9, 2021General / Fiction
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Wolf is requiring identification from Liz
Chapter 51
The Card
Posted October 17, 2021General / Fiction
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Wolf is testing the authenticity of the card
Chapter 52
What next
Posted October 26, 2021General / Fiction
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Liz has everyone pull over to look at some trees.
Chapter 53
The Special Tree
Posted October 30, 2021General / Fiction
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There are twists and turns on the road they are traveling
Chapter 54
The Switchbacks
Posted November 7, 2021General / Fiction
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