Great twisted ending!
Gets better & better as you go along; a clever plot!
clever
It followed the rule./
This submission showed good imagination. With a double surprise ending I was on the edge of my chair as I read it. Providing a British dialect circa 1910 was a bit risky but overall it worked. This was well written.
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