This poem leaves no doubt as to your true feelings for your loved one. It is a poem full of passion and devotion to one person with great rhyming, and the sincere ending leaves the reader with the feeling that you wrote it for someone special, Giddy
Your true and heartfelt words are beautifully spoken in this poem. You meet the syllable and line requirements of the contest. Very nice flow. I enjoyed the rhyming of lines 2 and 3 and the alliteration with heart/humanity, tear/time. Powerful. Great picture choice, too. Excellent work ... Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
This is a very heart felt piece that took me through your life's story of love and loss. It had a lovely meter and rhyme scheme and I sympathize with your demise. I wish for brighter days for you, friend.