Reactions Write a scene in which your main character receives a strange looking letter beat up with stains on its cover. The letter has no return address. What's in it? How does your character react to the contents once it is opened and why?
nothing to be embarrassed about. Just seems like an honest piece. Tends to bring out our best work. Sometimes, it is better to have some eruptions if it can help lead to the sorting needed for eventual peace. Great write!
I had a brother my parents seemed to favor. All the attention seemed to go to him, even though he was the trouble maker. Their attentions seemed to be always on him. I raised a big fuss. I was told, my brother had something wrong with him. His parents will probably be the last friends he had. He was on the wrong road and would probably never change. But his parents were probably be the last chance he had. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Rating of the book chapter Disappointment Chapter 9 of the book The Army Chronicles : Lohatla
Interesting details about how they have to interact with the farmers. Funny stuff them practicing. A tight nit bunch of guys. That should make for a lot of tense drama later. Charlotte not home. Hmmm. mikey
crzy, this is a good write with flowing rhyme. There is much wisdom laced throughout each line. Did you mean to say, "you have happen to of forgot"? You may have wanted it that way but no worries. :0 GracieAnn
this is very well written, zinnia, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the sun which hunts for what it needs and takes it and the moon which wraps the earth up and puts it to sleep. i enjoyed reading it.