Willing Hearts Chapter 10 A
Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?



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Rating of the poem Goddess Aphrodite by Gypsy Blue Rose

Yes, Aphrodite or Venus was quite the quite the beauty and was known to cause quite the Trojan War after she got the golden apple by bribing Paris with the love of Helen of Troy. So many stories about these Greek gods and goddesses.


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Rating of the poem Hiraeth by Videl Sky

Very well said, yes, those memories of childhood and where we spent them always come flooding back, I relate to the many films we always enjoyed for the umpteenth time, ****kahpot


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Rating of the poem guilt by Isabel Ames

Wow! welcome to FS, I like this very much, very emotional and moving, the only thing I do not understand, is why your introduction says this is an 8-line poem, neither your lines or your line markers add to 8, you may need to revisit this, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot


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Rating of the story Conservative or Liberal by Terry Broxson

This is quite the political rant. I hope you can find a candidate who meets your criteria, although, I don't see one who makes that cut in the current polls. What we really need is a total do over. I can't imagine where we will find replacements for all of them, but it certainly couldn't hurt this country more than the career politicians have. I say Heaven help us all.

Kim


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Rating of the story The Last Day by prettybluebirds

What an extremely sad and moving story, and so very well written. I can't even begin to imagine your pain and horror at losing such a loved son. I send you best wishes for the contest, along with hugs as I am sure you were in tears as you wrote this one.
Wendy


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