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Rating of the poem Alone and Confused by mtrybak

This is a well written and easy to follow poem with an accessible language to be understood by a wider audience which is good.
You deliever well your message and the feelings of the reader are attained. Good structure and well chosen artwork, which enhanced the meaning of your words. Indeed, many people will try to drag you done, but it is your choice to fall or not

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Rating of the book chapter The Party by Norbanus
Chapter 30 of the book Maxie

Some of the suspects are at the party, waiting for the big announcement. Dolly is there with Rocky, a devious character. No sign of Barry or Feeney. You give a great description of how Maxie looks when she's not wearing her biker attire. Despite the attraction, Jason and Maxie have business to take care of. Barry makes his dramatic entrance just before the missing Anna, Abigail. The shock is great when Maxie makes the announcement. Dolly fainting is a nice touch, and seems typical of her. Maxie's still in danger because the person behind the kidnapping is still unknown. Very dramatic chapter. judi

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Rating of the poem Forever with Grace by lakeport

A very good write that fits the poetic form and word count. This makes an interesting read as well as an attractive visual. I enjoyed the red. Thanks for sharing. Your friend, Bob

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Rating of the poem A Gentleman Here In The South by Roy Merritt

Yes this is well written my friend I enjoyed this reads so very well and good creativity using the word splendifferous
Well done my friend regards Jill

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Rating of the poem Resting at the Savior's Feet by Happy Poet

I enjoyed this beautiful journey that you take the reader on reminding us that in every stage of life we should mindful of God's love and plan for us. Such a beautiful poem.

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