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Rating of the book chapter Falling Asleep at School by RobinWrites
Chapter 5 of the book Tanya and Em

well written.. you did an excellent job on the transition for Tanya's dream back to the classroom. They dialogue flowed nicely, and it was easy to follow.

Just a couple of edits:
"Linda eyes", probably should be "Linda's eyes"
Need to have a comma between Tanya Linda


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Rating of the poem Nothing is Learned by Kingsland

good rhyming couplets including proximate rhymes like sign/kind
good use of internal rhyme also
I like the imagery and message of the road bending back
good alliteration in moments that matter
Brooke


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Rating of the poem Aural Sex

I'm so glad this not what I thought to was, but this a good entry into the senryu contest, it should do very well! I found the artwork appropriate but confronting! Good luck in the competition! Roy.


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Rating of the poem When They Go Missing or Put Down

It's never easy to lose our family, friends, loved ones or play mates in life. Dogs, cats, and even snakes, our companions that keep us safe and sane. Great job. :-)


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Chapter 6 of the book The Trining

I'm finding understanding this on each of its 'planes' is quite a challenge for me. Getting a mind picture of something so extraordinary is an effort, but I feel it is very skilfully written all the same, the characters are believable and even likeable and there's quite a deal of drama which all make for a very readable story, Giddy


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