wrote,
This is a great story. I have enjoyed reading this chapter. I look forward to reading more. It is interesting and intriguing. I never came across a dull moment or any slow parts. This s very well written. Excellent story. God bless.
wrote,
I liked your thoughts, Alexander, but I felt you did not pull them together smoothly, but they came through as disjointed thoughts passing through your mind. I must agree starvation is an atrocity in a world that has plenty, and also the fact that this world is kind of a testing ground where we learn to love and nurture goodness. Very interesting poem. Joyce
wrote,
Great work here, Juliette, a page right out of life! You had your people deal with the fight and the aftermath in a manner which, I feel will not only keep these two from any future aggression, but will also send a message to the rest of the community that this type of behavior will not be tolerated. Good Chapter.
irish
a month later
water has receded
leaving a sight
so disheartening
with homes
trailer parks
wiped out
and
for some it's
too late
as the government
promises to
help
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