This is a well written and easy to follow poem with an accessible language to be understood by a wider audience which is good.
You deliever well your message and the feelings of the reader are attained. Good structure and well chosen artwork, which enhanced the meaning of your words. Indeed, many people will try to drag you done, but it is your choice to fall or not
Rating of the book chapter The Party
Chapter 30 of the book Maxie
Some of the suspects are at the party, waiting for the big announcement. Dolly is there with Rocky, a devious character. No sign of Barry or Feeney. You give a great description of how Maxie looks when she's not wearing her biker attire. Despite the attraction, Jason and Maxie have business to take care of. Barry makes his dramatic entrance just before the missing Anna, Abigail. The shock is great when Maxie makes the announcement. Dolly fainting is a nice touch, and seems typical of her. Maxie's still in danger because the person behind the kidnapping is still unknown. Very dramatic chapter. judi