wrote,
A perfect way to describe the blessing of Heaven to your husband by a sign and signals of 'a lonely dove', which you had done so beautifully through your poem.
wrote,
Your expression in writing gives the reader an inside look of the turmoil. I like the way you reemphasize, ' I pretend to be happy...', it wraps around the other verses to give the overall theme of the poem its structure. Good job!
wrote,
Bob - I haven't read anything with this much internal tension in a long time. This truly deserves an exceptional rating. I had to go in to speed reading mode to see what happened, so if you made some errors, I raced right over them. Extremely well written and edited. Regards, Bill
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I enjoyed reading your poem with its combination of rhyme and alliteration. The two together gave it a jolly, upbeat tone (despite the grim soldier). Crunching, chattering and chuckle added a pleasant touch of onomatopoeia, as well. I loved the "flowers and ferns" on the window. Thanks for a cool read on a hot, muggy day!
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I love the painting and the peace that I see in the artwork I see within your poem. There is a message within this poem and you expressed it very well.
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