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Are You My Mother?
Baby Boomer trapped between tradition, liberation



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Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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Rating of the poem My Last Kiss by L.M.Mullins

This poem leaves no doubt as to your true feelings for your loved one. It is a poem full of passion and devotion to one person with great rhyming, and the sincere ending leaves the reader with the feeling that you wrote it for someone special, Giddy


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Rating of the poem Tragedy

Your true and heartfelt words are beautifully spoken in this poem. You meet the syllable and line requirements of the contest. Very nice flow. I enjoyed the rhyming of lines 2 and 3 and the alliteration with heart/humanity, tear/time. Powerful. Great picture choice, too. Excellent work ... Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!


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This is a very heart felt piece that took me through your life's story of love and loss. It had a lovely meter and rhyme scheme and I sympathize with your demise. I wish for brighter days for you, friend.


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Rating of the poem Been Sick

Wonderful Rispetto, I love that word nosology too, but where will I ever use it, ha ha!Hope you are feeling better, I sure empathize with the tissue thing! Happy Easter!


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Hi SWJ,

This is a really nice poem that touches my heart. How true it is and also what you wrote in your author notes. Thanks for sharing.

Kat


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