Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Karyn, oh I am sure he is....I don't think he was getting the jest of the physical report...LOL...enjoyed your little story...so very cute and very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 06-May-2014

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reply by the author on 06-May-2014

Thanks so very much, Linda, for taking the time to read and share your kind comments for this little,story. I always appreciate hearing from you and thanks for your encouragement.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

Comment from A Matter Of Words

Excellent

Such a fen, well-penned little piece, Karyn. The writing is so tight and I did not expect the punch line. Thanks so much for the laugh...Stephanie

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thanks for your great review for my story, Stephanie, and I appreciate your kind review and comments very much. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

reply by A Matter Of Words on 28-Apr-2014

You are very welcome. It is good to be able to drop in and read. Its like visiting an old friend.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Perfect, wonderfully humorous write, Karyn. You know I've seen that problemo on a couple of dudes. What the heck is the matter with fat that it doesn't have the decency to collect evenly throughout the piece? Some men just can't stand it that their wives are always right, can they? Love your happy face girl. I bet you she's right all the time too! ;-)

Excellent humour about the NFA. Now that I know what it stands for.

Gloria

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thanks so much for your great review and comments for my story, Gloria. It was so much fun writing this, so I'm glad you enjoyed it and the humor. Thank you for reading, and I always appreciate your response and encouragement.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

Comment from Alaskastory

Exceptional

'Read This!' gave me the best laugh-of-the-day. The serious tone in the build up of the doctor's infallible observations was perfect ground for your punch-line finish. Of course, it was a surprise finish, but nothing could be better. Great piece!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

I'm so delighted the story gave you a laugh, Marie. What a wonderful compliment! Thank you for taking the time to read and review my story, and for sharing your great comments. I'm so pleased you enjoyed, and thank you so much for the gold star.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

And I TOTALLY enjoyed the story, wondering where it was going to go, wondering what the 'but' was (I'm sure there's a joke in there somewhere). A light & delightful read.
:)Sharyn

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

I'm delighted you enjoyed the story, Sharyn, and thank you so much for your review and comments. Thanks for reading.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL, Karyn! That is brilliant! Isn't it strange, most men carry that extra weight on their stomach. I would like to know how you lost weight in one area. I want to lose a bit, but it goes off my face and I look like a haggard old witch! Worse still the rest stays put! I really enjoyed this story, Karyn, it's a really great read! xsx Sandra :)

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thank you so much, Sandra, for reading this story and for your wonderful review and comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed and it gave you a smile. Thanks!
Smiles,
Karyn : )

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

LOL. This is delicious fun. Perfect except for the weight on his belly. Boy, does that cover a mass of people. Love the punch line. Guess his wife should call him "jelly belly." now.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thanks for your great review and kind comments for my story, Spitfire. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Very cute and fast flash fiction story. I enjoyed this satirical write very much and this is worthy of being published in a men's mag. Don

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thanks for your great review and kind comments for my story, Don. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from Ritsal

Excellent

Is this fiction or Ray's non-fiction? Nevertheless, an enjoyable read with a funny ending. I was thinking the bad news would be that his insurance wouldn't pay for any of the tests. Good job.

Best wishes,
Rita

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Hi Rita. Thanks for taking the time to read my little story and for your kind comments. This is a combination of fiction and nonfiction of what his doctor told him. Thanks so much.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

reply by Ritsal on 26-Apr-2014

You're very welcome.

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

This was fun to read and good for a giggle or two. It is quite well written, and I enjoyed the whole thing. Yes, your character has the proof he needs to show his wife!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thanks for your great review and kind comments for my story, Evilynne. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.
Smiles,
Indy : )