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She Changed my Life

This friend of mine truly changed me

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Comment from Charlene0513
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A truly touching and heart-breaking story about perseverance and an adoration for Jesus Christ.
There is always one person that is the firm foundation to lean on when the trials emerge and you feel there is no sense on living or lose your faith, but because she believes in a loving and divine deity there is always hope for a better tomorrow.
Charlene

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
    This lady is a gem...a real one! Thanks for writing...it is so appreciated.
Comment from Bina1
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How lucky for you and your friend to find each other in your time of need. A beautiful, but painful story you tell here. Good luck in the contest, a fine entry you offer here.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
    She and I have just tried to help because we needed help...thanks so very very much.
Comment from Millibrad
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This is an excellent tribute to your friend and one that I enjoyed reading. You have succeeded in portraying Celia as the rock she obviously is.

There are a couple of things that I think need your attention:

"As she prepared to fly to France, she was trying to comfort her son, and all [those] around her."

Your husband's girlfriend entering the picture with no foreshadow of her presence is a bit jarring. The circumstances of this love triangle, if that's what it is, should have been foreshadowed.

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
    Honestly, I was deleting because of word count...and that was an area I took out. Thank you so much, and I will be more careful in future "cutting-room-floor"episodes, LOL Thank you for your insight.
Comment from Carole Rosa
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To the author of She Changed My Life. I had a friend who died three years ago with cancer. I would say that she changed my life also. It is amazing how two people can help to raise each other up to honor each of their life challenges. Your story is very nicely written with sympathetic reflections. Excellent. Carole

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
    Please accept my sincere sympathy, Carole. Losing ones we love is just so difficult. Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Karen B.
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What a wonderful tribute to your friend Celia for all she's endured and was still able to be there for you when you needed support. She sounds like an amazing person. Well written and heart touching!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
    She truly is just like this.Thank you for writing.It made my day.
Comment from suep
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Wow! This was truly touching and amazing. We all face difficult things in life, but when you read an account like this, of someone who has endured so much, and yet remained so strong and so faithful ... it is so inspiring. I can see why you chose this special friend to write about and how she has changed your life. Thank you for sharing this ... and who knows how many lives you will impact or change by sharing these experiences through your words...

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
    I was hoping for just that. It is not easy to write about her. I just wanted people to know of people like her. Thank you so much.
Comment from dbmccarter
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This is truly heart-warming and reminds us all how one person can make such a big difference in how we handle things. You have honored her in a great way and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
    Thank you for honoring her in your words. Blessings.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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What an extremely brave individual your friend Celia is. To be made to endure a loss as monumental as she had, and to do it with dignity, is not an easy thing to do. In addition to losing her daughter, Celia's husband was discovered to have cancer, and Celia had a corporation to run, as well as a son to take care of in high school. Talk about your full plates!

No way she could have accomplished and gotten through all of it without good, loving and caring friends, and the grace of God.

Well done, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    Thank you Dean. This friend is an unbelievable woman. I wish you all could meet her. If she knew I wrote of her, she would just shake her head... Thank you for your kindness and your sharing.
reply by Dean Kuch on 22-Apr-2014
    You're very welcome, it was my pleasure. I should think it would be quite something to know her.
Comment from WLHall
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It always amazes me how some people can be so strong in their faith to endure such tragedies while also supporting others through theirs. Celia certainly is one of those few. You are so blessed to have her in your life. Your essay conveys the deep feelings you have for her. And it's obvious your love for her in this writing is overflowing. Great job.
Wanda

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    Yep, she is one of the great rocks I lean on in my life. She is extraordinary.Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from wordsmatter2me
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I like that you have humbly expressed how the woman described as "an emotional and spiritual friend in Christ" changed your life. I feel all the many emotions that bought you both together, the common bonds between family and the trust one can have in our God. Celia is a friend many would love to have. To God be the Glory for your life with a friend.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2014