Tragedy
Pain has no borders.27 total reviews
Comment from zurxe
This poem really got me thinking. It is a truth stated in a poetic fashion. The psychology behind mankind's weirdest habits. To dislike one another one day until fear lures all together with a tightly knit invisible connective tissue.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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This poem really got me thinking. It is a truth stated in a poetic fashion. The psychology behind mankind's weirdest habits. To dislike one another one day until fear lures all together with a tightly knit invisible connective tissue.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Yes ,and once it dies down, it will be back to business as usual.
Thanks for reviewing and welcome to fanstory.
Comment from kiwijenny
This is one of the endearing things about humanity...we empathize and in a tragedy people reach out and help....bleeds in unison
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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This is one of the endearing things about humanity...we empathize and in a tragedy people reach out and help....bleeds in unison
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and bonus six.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Dallas Alice,
This was truly Exceptional. I too believe that tragedy affects humanity in this way. This naani elequently expressed that sense of collective conciousness. Really well done--Ted
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Dear Dallas Alice,
This was truly Exceptional. I too believe that tragedy affects humanity in this way. This naani elequently expressed that sense of collective conciousness. Really well done--Ted
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Thanks, Ted. And thanks for the bonus star. Sadly, the other side of that coin is sooner or later it will be business as usual.
Comment from mfowler
Wow, this is deep. I like the use of the mono-rhyme for such a short verse. It gives it power without distracting from the meaning of the verse. When tragedy strikes, people often do connect and grieve as one( think 9-11), but, although their tears are separate and cry alone, they are pat of a total unity of soul. What a pity, we can't achieve that in times of ordinary living. Excellent entry!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Wow, this is deep. I like the use of the mono-rhyme for such a short verse. It gives it power without distracting from the meaning of the verse. When tragedy strikes, people often do connect and grieve as one( think 9-11), but, although their tears are separate and cry alone, they are pat of a total unity of soul. What a pity, we can't achieve that in times of ordinary living. Excellent entry!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the great review. yes, unfortunately, it ill soon be back to business as usual.
Comment from visionary1234
a lovely example of the naani form here, almost epigrammatic - reads like a wise summary of humanity I think. Good entry! :)Sharyn
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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a lovely example of the naani form here, almost epigrammatic - reads like a wise summary of humanity I think. Good entry! :)Sharyn
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from w.j.debi
So much truth in your few words. Sometimes it seems to take w tragedy for us to realize our humanity and rich out to those around us. Beautifull artwork to compliment your message.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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So much truth in your few words. Sometimes it seems to take w tragedy for us to realize our humanity and rich out to those around us. Beautifull artwork to compliment your message.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from ArtGal
This Naani poem is absolutely beautiful. The wording says so much. The truth is there of how we come together when there's a tragedy. Our hearts bleed and our tears are shed, and I'm sure many prayers are said in times such as this. I wish you the best of luck in this contest. I thoroughly enjoyed reading. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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This Naani poem is absolutely beautiful. The wording says so much. The truth is there of how we come together when there's a tragedy. Our hearts bleed and our tears are shed, and I'm sure many prayers are said in times such as this. I wish you the best of luck in this contest. I thoroughly enjoyed reading. . .Sharon
Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the great review. Glad you like it.
Comment from seaglass
This naani, well written, reminded me of the unity that occurs in situations like the Boston Marathon Bombing and other such incidents. Healing is in unity. If only that unity could prevent tragedy before it happens.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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This naani, well written, reminded me of the unity that occurs in situations like the Boston Marathon Bombing and other such incidents. Healing is in unity. If only that unity could prevent tragedy before it happens.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for reviewing.
The disaster in Korea is what sparked this.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Indeed it does, and what a profoundly written piece about us all pulling together as one cohesive unit in time of catastrophe or dire circumstance.
This was an excellent Naani, with a very inspirational and uplifting message.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Indeed it does, and what a profoundly written piece about us all pulling together as one cohesive unit in time of catastrophe or dire circumstance.
This was an excellent Naani, with a very inspirational and uplifting message.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Leineco
Great use of the naani form!
You evoke an instant connection with the idea of "universal" empathy i the face of "grand scale" tragedy - like 9/11 , the ferry that just sank, school shooting, etc. At those time. . .in the privacy of our rooms - each of us cry silent tears. all our hearts beating as one, creating - for all intents and purposes - a world heart.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Great use of the naani form!
You evoke an instant connection with the idea of "universal" empathy i the face of "grand scale" tragedy - like 9/11 , the ferry that just sank, school shooting, etc. At those time. . .in the privacy of our rooms - each of us cry silent tears. all our hearts beating as one, creating - for all intents and purposes - a world heart.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the comprehensive review.
