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Lifer by Deniz22
The Prisoner writing prompt entry













Forty years ago, I’d had it. It was my freedom day.

Her blue eyes had entrapped me. 22 and married for three years!  Excitement left, six months after the vows.

My dissatisfactions grew like barnacles on a hull. Little things, they built up, slowing the ship of matrimony.

 I packed my gear, left a note: “I gotta be free!”

Before I could get out, she came, read and leaned against the wall, crying. I turned to go.

Wham! A blonde little girl with her mother’s blue eyes imprisoned my leg and my heart.

“Daddy, don’t go!” Still here...and glad.

 


Writing Prompt
In 100 words, or less, write a short story--not necessarily a flash-fiction, though it could be--on the theme/subject/topic of 'prisoner'. It could be literal or metaphoric.

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