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Jisei Haiku for the 6 words Contest
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
: The Vineyard by Gypsy Blue Rose
6 Word Poetry contest entry

 

buried in his vineyard—

becomes compost

 

 


Author Notes
The Vintner is buried in his land and his remains provide nourishment for the vineyard he loves. He becomes one with the grapes. It's a zen concept.

the 6-word contest rule is to write a poem in any poetic form. I chose haiku.

Vines = a grape plant for making wine

Vintner = vineyard owner

JISEI HAIKU (death poem) is a genre of Japanese poetry. It offers a reflection on the imminent death of the author. It originated in Zen Buddhism. They tend to offer a reflection on death coupled with a meaningful observation of life. The poem's structure can be written in haiku 5/7/5 or tanka 5/7/5/7/7 form, which can have fewer syllables. Death poems are typically graceful, natural, and emotionally neutral. Death is described, metaphorically, references such as sunsets, autumn or falling cherry blossom suggest the transience of life. wikipedia
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

Painting by Giuseppe Pino

     

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