Heavy The Head
My entry for the Minute Poetry contest13 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
And I always thought the quote was "Hairy is the head that tops a clown!" Anyhow, this was moody and melancholy and the type of work that causes your reader to ponder. Very well done!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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And I always thought the quote was "Hairy is the head that tops a clown!" Anyhow, this was moody and melancholy and the type of work that causes your reader to ponder. Very well done!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
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Mine was the pleasure!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Minute poem contest entry with us. This poem is rich with descriptive details and emotion. It caused me to pause after I read it. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you for sharing this Minute poem contest entry with us. This poem is rich with descriptive details and emotion. It caused me to pause after I read it. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Mark Jackson
This artwork is beautiful. This is actually all a work of art. The words fit so well. I am pleased you found inspiration in Shakespeare and were kind enough to share that. This is essentially a tragic tale yet told with such charm. Thank you and good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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This artwork is beautiful. This is actually all a work of art. The words fit so well. I am pleased you found inspiration in Shakespeare and were kind enough to share that. This is essentially a tragic tale yet told with such charm. Thank you and good luck.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading this poem. I love daffodils. It symbolizes spring. Love the picture. Goes well with the poem. Very well written. Great job on this
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed reading this poem. I love daffodils. It symbolizes spring. Love the picture. Goes well with the poem. Very well written. Great job on this
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Janet Foor
Stunning artwork and presentation for your Minute poem.
Beautifully written Hullabaloo. Wishing you the very best in the contest.
Thank you for sharing you inspiration.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Stunning artwork and presentation for your Minute poem.
Beautifully written Hullabaloo. Wishing you the very best in the contest.
Thank you for sharing you inspiration.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from GoWiSt
Nice complementary picture art choice.
"sun's warmth, wind's chills;" Good juxtaposition of contrasting feels.
"a scented death." Interesting oxymoron imagery.
Met the line and syllable cunt requirements for this poem type/contest. However, the 3 stanzas would be more distinct if you put an extra line of spacing after the 4th and 8th lines.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Nice complementary picture art choice.
"sun's warmth, wind's chills;" Good juxtaposition of contrasting feels.
"a scented death." Interesting oxymoron imagery.
Met the line and syllable cunt requirements for this poem type/contest. However, the 3 stanzas would be more distinct if you put an extra line of spacing after the 4th and 8th lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your minute poem. It looks like you got the syllable count correct, and I liked that the poem was inspired by a Shakespeare quote. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed your minute poem. It looks like you got the syllable count correct, and I liked that the poem was inspired by a Shakespeare quote. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thanks!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Hull....and responsibility can sure weigh a person down, to the point of breaking sometimes. It's a heavy cross to bear and can be overwhelming
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Another fine poem, Hull....and responsibility can sure weigh a person down, to the point of breaking sometimes. It's a heavy cross to bear and can be overwhelming
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Mike!
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, this is a winner for sure, hullabaloo! Beautifully crafted and presented in minute poetry form. Absolutely stunning!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Oh, this is a winner for sure, hullabaloo! Beautifully crafted and presented in minute poetry form. Absolutely stunning!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure. So beautiful! :))
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
A beautiful poem accompanied by a stunning image.
'In daffodils she made her bed,
left words unsaid
as there she wept,
her secret kept.'
Full of poetic mystery, it keeps you guessing what her secrets were.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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A beautiful poem accompanied by a stunning image.
'In daffodils she made her bed,
left words unsaid
as there she wept,
her secret kept.'
Full of poetic mystery, it keeps you guessing what her secrets were.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
